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ruana007 5/13/13 . chapter 17Finally! I usually read this from my android when i cant sleep, now i caught up on pc. Im gunna fave this and hope for an update. I really love how you write, Im studying at university in England (im romanian-italian) and still i found some words i was not sure what they meant. Which means I approve of your vocabulary. Im not sure if youre english or not but Im glad i even learn something from reading fanfics. Big thumbs up for plot and vocab. Cheers |
Arakan7 5/2/13 . chapter 17...*snickers* Oh boy, how perfect that was... Tsukune and Hakuto's lil bro moment in the latest manga chapter and his 'confession' of sorts here in your latest chapter. It brought a smile to my face...okay, it was snickers all around. Geez, what is it about Tsukune that makes everyone want to protect him... and how can I get a bottle of that? I was about to ask if Moka has gotten over the visual image of 'Mom porn' but then that was another fanfic altogether, ne? My bad. :D |
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo 5/1/13 . chapter 17nice man i'm glad you updated |
Ahubbard676 5/1/13 . chapter 17As always great ch |
DanTheJIGGERMAN 5/1/13 . chapter 17Great chapter, the development is really coming along. I'm very excited to see everything come together, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work |
Alhazad2003 4/30/13 . chapter 17Ugh, I feared what you had planned with the given title, and it seems to fit this version of Mizore to a T. So now Moka and Tsukune are on the run, or after Super Siscon? Either way, the massive trainwreck is fast approaching, can't wait for it. :D |
TykkiMikk 4/30/13 . chapter 17did the chapter have to be so short? |
ZachZ 3/15/13 . chapter 16 great, cant wait for the next chapter:) |
GorillaComingATYA 3/14/13 . chapter 16One of my favourite stories to read, please keep up the great writing! :) |
Alhazad2003 3/13/13 . chapter 16Hoboy, so that's how Tsukune fell from grace. Truly tragic. One of his most tragic characterizations, I'd say. And Miyabi, just as slimy as he's always been. What I wouldn't give to see greaseball's hair set on fire, or something along those lines. He always seems to get away, I really hate villains like that. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. |
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo 3/13/13 . chapter 16slightly confused? why is Miyabi not acting? |
DanTheJIGGERMAN 3/13/13 . chapter 16Great chapter, I love the backstory and development. As always your writing is excellent. Keep it up. |
Deci The 7ThSin 3/13/13 . chapter 16And it all comes falling together. Tensions are rising at points, Tsukune and Moka are resolving a bump in their relationship (or are they?) and we come to learn that Tsukune murdered his parents, what a twist! We are given a reason for his obsessive nature (a broken mind needs an anchor in the world) about Moka, and Moka comes to realize that maybe she cares for Tsukune as much as he cares for her. While it may seem that much didn't happen in this chapter, you have set the stage for many events to come Once again I congratulate you on your writing, it is superb, and I wish you good luck in your future writing endeavors. Signed DeciQVoices |
darkkrt 3/13/13 . chapter 16nice and please update youkai to vampire please |
FreeTraderBeowolf 3/13/13 . chapter 16Again you bring such life to your characters. I really enjoyed the touching reunion between Tsukune and Moka. |