Excellent

Haha, ooh i really like your version of gold. I could totally see him doing this. I love it! You'd better have more chapters coming. I promise I wont pull a gold and refuse to eat it :D

Really good story! I hope there's more!

:D hahah this is really good and kinda dark humour cheek! i adore the fact that Mr Gold liked Belle instantly and tried to pay her his compliments but to no avale, then he started aggravating her so she'd come out and speak to him tehe such a Mr Gold think to do! please post another chapter, i'd loved to see where you'll take this dearie x

update!

I like this very much & hope that there will be more! Thank You for sharing with the rest of us!

I live ratatouille! The movie.
So at first I was thinking "what an odd concept" like you didn't have to use the ratatouille characters etc. but I read it, I'll get over my little issue.
I lived Golds part at the end. That was so perfect. He'd sent back the soup. All because he wanted to meet belle. Aw I don't think I'll get over this couple any time soon. And I love this concept. Looking forward to more. Sorry for any errors. Too lazy to edit my review!

Cute beginning. Love Gold (the rat b*st*rd manipulator).

Please hurry back with another part!

He's a sneaky bastard. Sexy but sneaky. That was fun to read, and four chapters may not be enough!