I love it when you work events on the show into this universe, and really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to Jane and Lisbon having a reunion one of these days!

Oooh, Grace and Lisbon get the "What did you mean?" exchange! And Barlow has been integrated already! And I'm glad this came out fairly quickly post finale because it gives me all the more feels. :D And interesting getting Grace's explanation and how Kimball sort of agrees, though Rigsby's still conflicted. It's interesting, somehow, I wouldn't have expected Wayne to be the most resistant to Jane, but I kinda like that angle.

Nice getting more into Lisbon's head and her trying to figure out where Grace and the kids really are at with Jane and seeing how while they do have reason to be angry or resentful to him, the relationship is still more complex than just that. A trait she and (well just Grace for now) kind of share. I'm excited to see where that goes!

Hmm, so given the last episode, I'm going to assume that Lorelei was killed at the Deed's place. Unless she still has a little more to do in this fic. Or she might've already done that and we just didn't see it and it'll be relayed to his through Jane's thoughts later on.

And yay for Grace referring to Jane as father! I'm still annoyed with him, but it's nice to see that Lisbon wasn't the only one who had a connection with Jane and had a bond/love for him. Curious to see where this goes!

I loved the bit with Teresa and Grace. Even tho Grace kind of hurt her, it was still a sweet moment between mother and daughter. I am glad that Lisbon is at Virgil's, now she has some place where she can heal and do some heavy thinking and not be worrying about her kids all of the time. Cho sounds like he has everything under control and Wayne/Grace seem to be doing well also. Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds. Thanks again for the update.

"I knew this was going to end a disaster the day I married him." -spins in chair- Ohhhhhhhhhh! Paraphrasing!
And, oh, okay, I got it now, what Jane was doing. And Minelli! :D Unless he's helping RJ. Jane's list of names has poisoned me. Everyone's RJ.

Uh oh. :0 Lisbon! That's really the only thought that keeps going through my mind right now. Okay, here come more, Lisbon being all motherly boss to her family! See how it's done, people? But now, uh oh. Lisbon!

Hmm, interesting revelation about Henry Deed and the Lorelei's company. But Jane, ""He is using you to drive a wedge between myself and my wife" that wasn't something that inevitable, mister. At least, as far as I know. Although it interests me that Jane said his "children", plural, which would include Grace, Kimball, and Wayne. I can't remember if he's specifically referred to those three as his children. If so...I suppose that's kinda good, but also a little late there, Patrick.

Oh boy, you really know how to end on a cliffhanger. UGH, lol. That was an exciting chapter. I even felt bad for the Andersons. lol I wonder how bad Lisbon is hurt. What a brave and stupid thing to do, but knowing her, she would do anything even sacrifice her life to save someone she loved. Oh well, they made it across. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Heh, even panicked oxen know better than to argue with Lisbon! Enjoying this very much!

Well, I got most of this chapter; however, I was a little disapointed as I thought you were giving Jane an "out" from sleeping with Lorelei. I thought you were going to write that she had lied to Lisbon because of Henry and what he wanted her to do and is to the women. However, I now know that Jane did indeed sleep with Lorelei so Jane is now dead to me. lol. Having her say that she hope she was pregnant twisted the knife even more in my heart. I don't want Teresa to forgive him. His actions just prove that Red John is more important then she is.

The author's note for this chapter made me smile. GO KAREN. Kimball telling the ox not to sneeze made me laugh. And Wayne and Grace holding hands made me happy, even if I can't ship them here.

I guessed Julia was a child they'd had together. Is there an in-show reference for her? And I think it's adorable how Wayne looks up to Kimball.

So this is kind of strange to read, because one of my first thoughts when I started this chapter was I can't ship Rigsby and Pelty if they're siblings. And then by the end of the chapter, I was thinking how it's weird for Cho to be called Kimball, and realized that he ISN'T Cho here, cause they'd all have the same last name. And then some of the people Lisbon and Jane are talking about in the end, I'm assuming are referencing someone from the show, but I don't remember many names other than the main team. But I'l still very intrigued by this whole crossover!

So at first I was thinking that Lisbons kids were OCs. Then I remembered that they were the rest of the team. And then I got even more excited. :D