Great story! The area of what happened to Willie was a great mystery and you filled it a horrifying behind-the-scenes looked that filled the gaps about how a wild, rebellious guy like Willie Loomis could have been so completely cowed into an obedient servant.

A very good read - great use of imagery!

Wow! I really like the way you wrote about the lost love - a perfect explanation as to why he turned into an uncaring jerk! The descriptions are so vivid and I can picture exactly what's happening.

Well written! Really enjoyed the story.

someone hug this guy stat!

Ah! It just keeps getting better.

I am thoroughly impressed.
Fanfic writers often seem capable of at most one of two things:
1. An amazingly well written plot combined with stylistic writing and believable subjects true to their original characters.
or
2. Fast updates

You have managed to do both. You don't sacrifice quality for quantity, nor quantity for quality.
mindblown
Please continue to write. Willie is my absolute favorite Dark Shadows character and you seem to be the only talented writer that tells his story.

Okay I'm going to shut up now xD Eagerly awaiting more stories about our poor abused willie loomis! (I feel like such a sadistic bastard reading this... I love it!)

I am completely obsessed. I made an account just so I could follow and fav this story.
please continue to keep me too freaked to sleep and too terrified to look away.

I'm obsessed, and eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Damn! love this story! Why doesn't Barnabas bites Willie on the neck he does with girls?

Holy sh**, what a good chapter!

This is a very chilling story. One that should not be read in the dark!

Another great addition! Such a chilling story; I'm glad you've been continuing it!

Another terrifying chapter! You sure know how to scare the hell out of you'd readers.

Wow! I am impressed! Very chilling account of what happened after Willie opened Barnabas' coffin. I do inferred hope you write more.