|Reviews for Pear Shaped|
| chechebon 8/17/12 . chapter 1
pls no slash... just nake this a general story with no pairings. is getting damn notorious for having slash stories up the wazoo that finding a good nonslash story without the same formula being used over and over is difficult. and while i do admit that there are some very good this site, it's starting to get annoyingly predictable when it's all you get to read. so no, pls no slash.
| Ronnie.H 8/17/12 . chapter 1
i like this story. i hope Harry is not too godlike in this fic. oh god i would love if it was a slash story, maybe with Clint. i haven't seen one of those yet, though i guess it would be difficult, what with him being with Loki.
| JaceH83 8/17/12 . chapter 1
I haven't seen the Avengers yet, i have to wait for the DVD, but i started reading this because a fair few of the crossovers start in the Iron Man 1 or 2 stages, with build up to the main event. I'll be following this, but wont read any more until ive seen it, but my vote will still be put forward, and that is PLEASE no Slash, Harry/any female is fine, gay characters are fine, if they're already gay in thier respective fandom, but there's never been a hint of that in HP (Dumbledore aside) or the Marvel movies (to my knowledge). The overall obsession with Slash in fanfiction is completely baffling to me. Hope this one doesn't go that way, but if it DOES, please put it in a pre-chapter disclaimer so people wont be blindsided.
| Narjiro 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Please no slash. please don,t do slash
| kibafang01 8/17/12 . chapter 1
love it great writing style how bout harry/thor or harry/steve not enough harry/steve and i can't find any harry/thor
| DogStar 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Hi, I like it so far, it's a good start. Could you just watch your 3rd and 1st person POV's so they don't mix? It's kind of annoying. And could you make it a HP/Tony or HP/OMC, maybe someone from the Unspeakables? Update quickly, please.
| Lemo 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Got about half way through but then it switched from 3rd person POV to 1st then back to 3rd which is a massive pet peeve of mine \ totally ruins to flow of the story.
| belle hawk 8/17/12 . chapter 1
It looks very promising. It was a good chapter hope to read more.
| Sinclairum 8/17/12 . chapter 1
This is wonderful! Even if it does blow up in your face in the long run, i think it's definitely worth it for you to continue this story as it is right now at least because i absolutely love the content so far.
Your plot line is definitely one of the most interesting i've delved into and quite refreshingly new.
I usually have reservations about Harry being so powerful but it seems you've achieved a perfect balance here because his power is reflected in his behaviour quite well.
Just to put my vote out there if you'll consider it, is that i would like for this to be slash or maybe just no pairing for Harry. However, whichever way you decide to go with pairings, I'll definitely continue to read this story.
I hope you update soon!
| Naginator 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Like it so far but plz no slash. More than half of these are already and its getting annoying. I hope for harry/natasha
| Hasan Saeed 8/17/12 . chapter 1
hope u update soon but please no slash
how about harry/natasha or an ofc or tracey davis or susan bones
no slash, hermione, luna or ginny
| Raychaell Dionzeros 8/17/12 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! MORE MORE MORE!
| liankitty 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Pretty interesting start so far. I wouldn't mind if you make this Slash or just gen - whatever fits the story better.
Thanks for writing!
| ChaosIdeals 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Interesting :) Will look forward to anything in the future.
| Ivy Raven 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Love your Harry, hope he doesn't just roll over and take it once Fury starts barking orders at him! And Agent Mills is actually Agent Hill(if you are talking about the S.I.C of SHIELD; or is it an OC?) I would like it if you made it slash, especially Harry/Tony, but don't make the whole story revolve around the whatever couple you end up choosing. And try to proof-read it before you post it, the mistakes are small but annoying and it makes me think things like 'if you don't know the difference between tenses or there/their, your/you're, whose/who's stay away from writing or get a Beta.' This does not mean you because I haven't seen such in this chapter but watch your tenses and write the words whole so I don't find 'the' where 'they' should have been, and so on.
Overall I really like it, it has potential, just don't make Harry join the Avengers. He has his own life to lead, a division to command and no patiance for pushy authority! Update soon.