Awesome story, I love the irony. Hope you write more soon.

Well, quite the interesting start. I can't wait to see what happens.

Oh, glad to see this story is still going! I had forgotten about it, and it is a fun one.

For some reason as I was reading the idea of Micah being the one to say "the words" hit me, her talking to him and asking who he wished away and his reply of "My brother, the Goblin King" and how she would respond... ah. Both ideas are amusing in their own way, though I think I like how yours is working out better.

Loved it :)
Your writing has a great flow and you keep the reader interested throughout the story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings.

I really like this. It's good.

I am really enjoying this story! I do hope that you update because you wouldn't believe how hard it is to find a clean, interesting, well written story around here. good job.

Ooh delicious! I like this, and as an aside, I'm starting to ship me some MicahxSarah ;)

Although I see the grammar mistakes you mentioned, I hardly even notice them because the story is lovely :) Do keep going, I'm anxious to see this one through!

This is quite a dilemma. In a similar fit of pique to Sarah's own adventure, Jareth wished his own brother away to Sarah, which is amusing in and of itself.

Sarah has been embued with the power of being summoned by a wish, just as Jareth is summoned by wishers.

It is not yet known if Sarah has other magic, but in a moment of haste, she asked Jareth to discover a way to rid herself of this magic.

Jareth might have no power over Sarah; but unless I've missed my guess, you intend to create a romance between them both. In a similar way that Jareth had the ability to show up and talk (or, rather, taunt) with Sarah, I'm hoping that Sarah would be able to show up or somehow communicate with Jareth.

Regardless of if or when this is done, I hope that Sarah's hastily spoken "What's said is said" won't come back to haunt her.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Sincerely,
Miriam

I realize that Sarah is new at dealing with her wishways and/or other

Really like it. :D Nice spin.

As long as Sarah and Jareth are the main love story in this fic, I'm completely fine with OCs! In fact, sometimes I love OCs better than the original characters! (I know! I'm horrible!) But I really like this story idea! It's original!

GAHHHH! I love love love this story!

I LOVE the plot! So original!

Micah seems interesting maybe he'll teach Sarah some magic?

Soooooooooo amazing! I love love love this story so much! You have them down very well and your plot is great!

I like it. Keep smiling. :-)