and you know S/he is high fiving Elvis right now.

lolz. Thts creepy. Havin sum watch u while ur doin da nasty!

Haha. Cute.

' "You know, everytime we do this I have the sneaking suspicion that She's watching." '

That just made my few moments. They both know it's true. How voyeuristic of Her. Haha. I liked this. Dialogue pieces are always fun. So was this.

Be good, do good, and keep doing that good thing you do.

Cheers,

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Bisexual.

Look, it's a dead body... !

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

Lmao, Omg, The best dialog piece I have read so far! Kudos!

love it

LOL That was awesome. :D I loved it.

Marry Me?...Please? I love you! XD THIS WAS FAB! ^_^

that was for just comentary hot :)

yeah, good!

I loved it, like I love all of your fics, and I think it's cool that you tried it a different way this time, but I would LOVE it if you made this into a... hm... I wonder how I can say this so that I don't confuse you, but a non-dialogue piece. You're so good with those! Okay, well, see ya later, I'm off to read the rest of your fics :)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Lol, this was really good! I liked it like this! Lol ^_~ SEE YA
-Deity

*g* Cute!

Cute. Verrrrry cute. Damn you, I wrote some (unposted) Harry Potter Remus/Sirius slash sooo much like this. Phooey.

mmm, not ruined in the slightest. ::likes::

Either add narration or make it a script.



The last part ruined sex for me the next three decends. Not an exhibitionist.