emma this is really short and i don't remember it and its a clif hanger! AH! WRITE MORE OR I WILL TEAR OUT UR RIB CAGE AND WEAR IT AS A HAT! (and a great big star for imigary((i cant spell that!))!)
~*funny voice* U know who!

Its great emma! Even though u have already had me read this story the second time it was better. I like the rhyme at the end (did i spell rhyme right?, it doesnt look right). The story keeps my attention the whole time. Its great! Can't wait for chapter two! maybe u already made chapter 2....have i read it, i dunno. oh well. Talk to u in school!

hey this is a really great story! WRITE MORE! HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME HERE (in america)! luv ya! miss ya! -Sylvie

hey emu
great story i am so glad that i got to be that first one to review your story
it was a great one too
you make me so proud
i cant wait for you guys to write more so i can read it
(it sounds really greedy but its not)
miss you come back from france soon
liza