|Reviews for Inheritance|
| Guest 3/31/13 . chapter 11
That's how you end it?
What was the point of a conspiracy plot if you can't be bothered to deal with it?
And it was so good up until now.
| kuroninja 3/17/13 . chapter 11
Nice story. Is there going to be a sequel for this story like if they have a kid or so and if Ginny and Molly try to do something again.
| Azrael Jinsei 2/25/13 . chapter 11
Thank you for writing this
| GoddessonmyKnees 10/14/12 . chapter 11
Great story. Harry and Sev are sooo cute when they are cuddly.
| Kimi Lowe 9/15/12 . chapter 11
Love the story. Very unique way to bring Harry & Severus together. Brilliant.
| ShatteredDragon 9/12/12 . chapter 11
awww this story was so sweet i think i got cavities ;D
| Chase Bloodmire 9/6/12 . chapter 11
I enjoy the plotline but I feel it was a bit... rushed. I really would've liked to see this stretched out and thr romance between Harry and Snape build a liitle more. But all in all it was fairly decent for a quick read.
| Luna 9/2/12 . chapter 11
Sorry that I don't have the concentration for an everlasting review but I'll try my best!
Ok first To make Harry Lord was a interesting idea. I never thought of it before but it has a ring to it.
One thing that really put me off was that Snape smiled... XD that was a bit disturbing since it was a geniu smile
But even more disturbing are Molly and Ginny Weasley. Maybe Ginny could... imagine something like that but I certainly can't imagine Molly trying to get Ginny to sleep with Harry just for money. That is really unsettling but I know you needed someone for the plot
It was funny when he told McGonagell that he would not ask Snape about his mother and then he did precisely that XD and the time where he always had to look at the potion.
I saw that proposel coming but I would have looked exactly as Harry and Hermoine did XD hit by a bus It was the best where Hermoine told him about intimacy *hahahaha*
That Severus helped him was ok but the change from help to love was a bit quick because like you described it there had to be something there before and the one week would just be used to really unfold the feelings... of course you wanted the relationship between Harry and Sev but maybe next time let them pretend two weeks or two and a half before it dawns . Otherwise I liked your description foremost the part with "I want to" I forgot the chapter was Snape said something about looking forward to it that scene was great and the times when they squabble. Also priceless was the scene with McGonagell when she got what was going on XD I just wanted to see her face then it is a pity that you never have a camera when you need one I don't remember all the good scenes blame the time o.o' but the scene with Snapes tight pants was a scream XD and where Harry says: We've got people to shock But I can't wrap my head around the fact that Harry is calling Snape babe... it sounds disturbing
I liked your story the idea was great but please don't disturb me again that much XD Snape is smiling, Molly is scheming and Ginny is I don't want to think about it XD and thank you for the happy end I love happy ends
Oh boy look at it and here I was babbling about how I couldn't write a decent review XD
| sjrodgers23 9/2/12 . chapter 11
sequel to this story thank you
| BSolomon 9/1/12 . chapter 11
Fast paced and good to the last word
| Tlcatlady 8/30/12 . chapter 11
A nice happily ever after story; I really enjoyed it. TLC
| johnny.vick 8/29/12 . chapter 11
this is a good story will ther be more please say yess its gooooood..
| Reaping-Vampire 8/25/12 . chapter 11
X3 freaking hot and fantastic! X3
| Mari Wollsch 8/24/12 . chapter 11
loved it xx
| Mimi 8/18/12 . chapter 11
This story is fantastic XD
i love it