What a treat to find this being continued! I love the overall darkness of the story, the heightened stakes of everything. The dynamic between Bo and Lauren - of Bo's frightening power - is intense in a way that the show only plays with around the edges. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Very interesting! I look forward to seeing where it goes. Thanks!

OMG! I'm so worried about Bo and the frayed nerves of Team Bo.

I'm sure with the next Part you will have alot of fun.

Thanks for writing such a good fic.

So glad you decided to come back to this story. Looking forward to more chapters soon.

That was sad & beautiful at the same time.

Wow, this is a fabulous story, no doubt somewhat AU now that S3 has started airing, but you've really captured the tension of Bo's darkness and how that could play out with Lauren. Your writing is beautiful, powerful, and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Wow this story is really good! I hope you continue soon. Despite everything, I like this new character, I'm forgetting her name at the moment. Oh, and I love how you wrote the Dyson kenzi scene in this chapter. Well done

where the hell is dark!bo?!

My my B really can create trouble can't she? The Valkyrie and Aoife. What a combo.

You have my interest for sure.

Bo the stag? God help us!

I really hope Bo knows what he's doing.

I wonder if t was Aoife who appeared to Kenzi and Trying to help Bo having heard the news!

All good. Ancient was scary.
The last part (paragraph) was confusing with the many pronouns and many female characters in the same scene.

Ouch... it is getting tense... and why is she more valuable dead? Please write more?
Thank you!

Christ!What the hell!Is Bo going to be all right?

Would love to see this from Bo's perspective indefinitely!

I like it and I'm curious as to where you are going with this. Please write more? Thank you!

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