| Reviews for The Messiah Complex |
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Cartman TeenAss 6/17/13 . chapter 13 Now the real shit storm is about to begin!Go Alex Mercer!Save Dana and kick Pariah's megalomaniac ass!Activision should read this kick ass fanfict and return to Mercer when Prototype 3 is fucking Haw! |
DinoZilla 6/16/13 . chapter 13 Just hope Alex stop Dana's revengeful attitude before hell break ,amazing update there hope in the end,Alex kick Pariah's ass in the end.I wonder how Pariah gonna explain this to Dana why Alex is still you in the next chapter! |
creeves59 6/16/13 . chapter 13 YES! Alex is back in full view! Please continue! XD |
Fanboy316 6/15/13 . chapter 13 After the storm,Alex completely and permanently kicked Pariah and his accomplishes asses. |
The Alien of Pluto 6/15/13 . chapter 13All I can see (from/for a humour perspective) is Alex and Elizabeth just walkin' up in the middle of all this Infect chaos toward Pariah and looming over him going, "Son, don't you think you went a little overboard? Call off the Infected and stop all this nonsense." And then the Infect all go and chill on some deserted island and Dana, Alex, Pariah, and Elizabeth become some weird kind of family together. But that last bit of this chapter? Hoo boy. I'm so excited for the next chapter now! *flails wildly* |
Rialga 6/15/13 . chapter 13Damn, looks like Dana is already beginning to suffer from the after-effects Pariah just mentioned early on in the chapter. Her calling Maya a weak human seems to just be establishing this fact. But Alex has shown up! Hopefully, once she and him get some alone time, he could try to clear everything up and maybe help her with her powers. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Totong 6/15/13 . chapter 13 DUN!DUN!DUN!Alex appears before Dana and it seems Pariah gonna feel what the meaning of"Payback's a Bitch!".Onwards true believer,excelsior! |
Harbinger Of Kaos 6/15/13 . chapter 13Man, I can't to see how you have him react to too Alex's arrival, I can say that he won't be pleased with his sister being manipulated like that and then when he meets mom...that ain't gonna be pretty. |
kyrogue23 6/15/13 . chapter 13Alex is here the original zeus has came and stop his sister from making the wrong mistake. |
karthik9 6/15/13 . chapter 13It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates. |
Khazan 6/15/13 . chapter 13that was shorter than I expected but it's still a good read. Got no issues 'cept for the length but I assume that was deliberate |
Cartman TeenAss 6/3/13 . chapter 12 DAMN!Now Dana became Elizabeth Greene part two and wreck havoc in the New York area.I've hope Alex,Heller,Elizabeth and the Young Justice arrives and save Dana's ass in time and give Pariah and his cohorts the meaning of total update! |
DinoZilla 6/1/13 . chapter 12 Caldwell is back and ready to tangle with Pariah and with Alex and Elizabeth are backing them,this fight would epic.I only hope Dana would be rescue in time.I wonder how Dana would would react seeing Alex is alive and well?Fantastic update! |
Fanboy316 5/31/13 . chapter 12 Alex and Elizabeth to the rescue!I've hope they rescue Dana before everything fucked ,where's Superman?I could only imagine Superman hugging Alex in happiness seeing he is alive and Alex is thinking"What The Fuck?!".Anyways,outstanding update and I couldn't wait for what happen the next chapter! |
Totong 5/30/13 . chapter 12 Amazing update and wow Elizabeth Greene did 's not the same viral megalomaniac we known and become softer,caring and ,on the other hand became just like Elizabeth years ago and is now manipulated by Pariah and 's now up to Mercer,Greene,Heller and the Young Justice to kick-ass once more and save New true believer,excelsior! |