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| Reviews for The Great race |
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  hermasters bro 9/15/12 . chapter 1 you got the idea from a movie you on tuesday didn't you? |
 The Green Yoshi 8/18/12 . chapter 1This was good :) I couldn't help but laugh when Minna said, "Shirley-San please kick her ass for me okay" There are still some grammar issues and no quotations but overall I think this was good -TGY |
| Zoids Fanatic 8/18/12 . chapter 1 You need to work on spelling, caps, and grammar. I'm sorry, but I'll be honest there. |
