Great Story. The reason behind Nightwing's birth was much better than the original!

This was a very creative side pathway to chronicle the development of Nightwing. Pretty nice to have friends like Kal who can perform what might just be advanced technology in other places but seems akin to magic or a miracle on this planet. Nice touch to never have the hitman apprehended. As always, I enjoy your stories, particularly their psychological bent.

WHOAH WHOAH WHOAH! IT ENDED JUST LIKE THAT?!

asdfghjkl;';lkjhggsd. That was awesome. I was so excited that Robin actually got shot (not that it's a good thing) and didn't graze his arm or something. A lot of stories are almost predictable, like the main character of whatever isn't gonna die because if he or she did, it would be pretty much over. He was actually hit! 8D So it was really a nice change for me 8).

I gotta say that I feel that you were a bit lazy on this, yeah? A lot of misspellings and some wrong grammar I caught here :O But I enjoyed it none-the-less!

Thanks for the read Simon!

Truly interesting take on the birth of Nightwing.

One word - excellent.

A very good read and a nice spin on how Robin eventually became Nightwing.

What an interesting twist. I thought that you would have made it longer, but a two-shot is nice. After fixing his heart, there's not enough to thank 'uncle' Kal, but to use a vaguely-related name is just the start of a thanks that isn't really necessary. Keep up the good work and I'll see you in the next round, dark

As aways, a GREAT story. Very well written, and totally absorbing. Thanks so much!