For that person who gave me advice: Thank you so much for the advice! It really helped me. I already have 5 chapters written and will start updating on February 2nd. You gave me good ideas! Thank you so much for saying I'm a good writer. That really means a lot. Like I said you can give me advice or criticism. Thanks again! 3 your advice!

Rachita:)

Why don't you fuck off okay? Do you have a life? Like who do you think you are? Just stop with the cyberbullying and SHUT UP! God people are so annoying. BURN IN HELL!

Your face scared me.

I was a little confused at first because you switched acting to real life. Second, I think romance takes time. Maybe make each character have more detailed lines. I'm trying to be helpful! If you don't like my comments trust me, you don't have to listen to them. By the way, your writing is SOOOOO much better than many others I've seen. Great Job! I know it's a LOT of work!

Great! I feel that the story is moving a bit too fast though. Slow down and get that detail in there. :)

I think this improved a lot from the first one. Introduced us into the romance more. Awkwardness is key in relationships!

I think you really captured the personalities of Gabe and Jo. It sounded like what they would actually say. However, I think you could've gone into a bit more detail with why Gabe was so good with the baby and make the romance a little more noticable. Possibly, to get some laughs, you could've made them have an awkward conversation about other crushes and put some jealousy into the picture. I hoped this helped!

m'kay, sounds great!

Yay! And sadness. I hope they still see each other...

Yes, yes she does. Wow Busted, I thought this was gonna have something to do with Phineas and Ferb, but that would be weird.

Yay! I saw the episode, and honestly they should bring Jo back. I really like this, and I'm gonna read more now.

Cool :)

Update! I didn't really read Good Luck Charlie fanfics but I luv yours! Update! :)

Alrightie then :) Update soon :)

Good book