Dude, this is Awesome! It's so rare to find a GOOD Hellboy/OC syory. Please keep up the good work with this!

Cute. I am definately enjoying this, please continue. :D

Wow. I began reading your story, and I can honestly say that I didn't stop until there were no more words. Your use of detail is outstanding, and may I point out that your Hellboy is spot on. I'm very interested in seeing where this story will lead. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update!

Update soon please!

Very good! So is the 12-year old Liz?

Oh, my goodness! Only two chapters in and I'm in love! Update soon, darling! This is fantastic!

I'm definetely enjoying Ivy and HB's in character perfectly! Is the twelve year old girl Liz?

oh wow, a well written Hellboy/OC story! I thought they had all died out! thank god they haven't!

This is just awesome. You're keeping HB in character very well, and your OC is very easy to relate to. She's amusing in a cute and awkward way. I love how they're bonding over cookies! Personally, I'd prefer the one meeting updates. While they might be short, they'd take less time to write, and you could focus more on that scene rather than a whole year's worth. Please update soon!

Another great chapter I enjoyed it a lot! Hellboy was great, and the interaction was amazing! The decision is so hard because I'm selfish and want long chapters that come often, but I guess waiting would most likely be worth while if you did it by year. Hope you update soon!

Welcome back! What you do so well, is to express the soul of a young girl in how Ivy processes the daily happenings of her well-ordered life. Hellboy's phrases here are clipped, though awkwardly well-meaning in these self-initiated social encounters. He's not one to offer long-winded explanations. Spot on!
I think a chapter on each meeting would serve well, since you do create an initial setting of what Ivy has been doing and thinking, whether she's at work or engaged in outside activities.

I wouldn't mind either one, but the second is more preferable :3
Please update soon

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I think it is very interesting! Is Ivy a human? I only ask because her boss always call her an elf, or is that cause she is short? I am interested in reading more!

I really enjoyed the first chapter and you did an excellent job of keeping Hellboy in character. Also, your character Ivy looks like an interesting character (I'm curious what she's like 15 years later) and her boss looks like a hoot.

Now I like Liz but I'm aganist the Hellboy/Liz pairing because one: I LOVE Hellboy, okay, I mean what's not to love about the big guy? And second: their relationship was more brother-sister in the comics and their relationship in the movies just seemed awkward and out of character for them.

Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job on this chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!