| Reviews for A Smile Because You're Worth It |
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an0nym0u5.auth0r 12/14/12 . chapter 1It's so fluffy I wanna die! Love it! |
Lisa Cooper 11/29/12 . chapter 1No need to reply unless you want to. In A SMILE BECAUSE YOU'RE WORTH IT, I loved "A Broken Millennium". You did well representing a six year old and a nine year old. Your stories have at least an appropriate amount of depth to them. Thank you for the smile that story left me with. L. |
jediahsokaroxx 10/11/12 . chapter 2AWWW, sorry that seems like the only intelligent thing coming out of my mouth! It's just so sweet and heart-warming! :D |
jediahsokaroxx 10/11/12 . chapter 1AWW, that was incredibly sweet and adorable! :) I loved it! :D |
Natasha 8/29/12 . chapter 2 Awwww! This is so cute! The first one is my favourite. Could you write some more M/M stories of when they were kids? Pleeeeeaaasee! With a cherry on top? :P |
Just Believe786 8/25/12 . chapter 2I love it! |
sprog101 8/20/12 . chapter 2aww so cute! :D |
FireLily25 8/20/12 . chapter 2I thought that this chapter was adorable. James walking and Mia taking a while to figure it out was so cute. I also thought that it was cute that we got to learn more about how Mia is when she is pregnant. That she had constant morning sickness( or all day sickness) rings true and helps the reader to see Mia as a true person, that has regular struggles. Thank you for the nest chapter and I can't wait for the next smile. |
Nightingale63 8/19/12 . chapter 2Babies. Cuteness is their superpower! |
les amoureux 8/19/12 . chapter 2Dawww so cute! Pleased by all these updates! :) |
les amoureux 8/19/12 . chapter 1So adorable! Love this smile idea and this smile story! Can't wait to read more! |
Guest 8/19/12 . chapter 1 awwww this story isso cute. i love it |
Nightingale63 8/19/12 . chapter 1Aww! Artistic Mia probably would have the visual ability to do much better than a normal 6 yr old. And her desire to please the cranky boy was really very sweet. Never apologise for writing a story about nothing (did Seinfeld ever apologise for a whole series about nothing?). Fun story! |
sprog101 8/19/12 . chapter 1Aww so cute! :D I love little Michael and Mia almost as much as I love teenage/adult Michael and Mia :D |
FireLily25 8/19/12 . chapter 1I loved this one, I always think it is cute when we can see them together as children, and through the viewpoint of a child, and this did that without being hard to understand, or not seeming like a child. I liked that Mia really wants to make Michel smile, and how she figures out how to do so (Star Wars is awesome by the way). You keep Mia in character by how she didn't like fighting ,and seemed to think that Maya would shout at her for no reason. Lily was in character because you keep her demanding even as a child . Which was funny, because I can imagine Lily bossing Mia around about the proper way to do a tea party or something that Lily feels she has to do to prove herself girly(Maybe you write a fan fiction about that ?). Michel was good and seemed to be character, we didn't get as much interaction with how his minds works, perhaps you can do a fan fiction in Michel as a child's point of view? But I wanted to say that I thought this was cute, and that I look forward to the next one-shot. |