Amazing story, though it was weird to read the Gwen bashing. Generally I like her, not her being with Arthur of course but still, strange. But still, I enjoyed reading this.

hahaha...the coffin come first before all the long story of avoiding eveil haha

Hi hun!
You blew my mind with this story! How you managed to write this incredible story in such short time is beyond me!
This is definitely one of my favorite fics of yours.
I loved the Snow White theme and Merlin looks to me like a boy version of Snow White with his pale skin and dark hair, he's so cute :)
I loved how Gwen and Morgana are "partners in crime" and that Gwen isn't a saint like in the show.
I felt that even though she made a short appearance here you still managed to give her a lot of depth which I really liked.
I gotta say that I loved how badass Freya was! She had this whole avenger thing going on and I liked how she cares deeply for Merlin and how she isn't the scared girl that we know her as.
"Your worst nightmare" now that's badass!
And come on, we had some Dragoon the Great action! I love him, I think he is everyone's favorite old man. He's hilarious and I love the faces he makes.
But as much as I loved every single one of these words my favorite part is the first kiss scene.
It's a very iconic scene that everyone knows since children and I love how you translated it onto Merlin.
And that sex scene was hot and steamy as usual, you always feed your readers very sexy Merthur moments that I personally need to survive :D
I was so happy when they got married and Merlin was pregnant.
Although the bit where Merlin tells Arthur he's pregnant was awkward and we all know now that Arthur has no tact whatsoever!
I loved the ending as well, how they had more children and were happy and then were buried in the cave, I thought it had a nice symmetry since that's where they met.
Brilliant story!

Ill say thia again, i Really liked it! You've stolen a plot straight out of my head I was going to use for the two kings but you can keep it!

Loved this story

I love it! It's such a sweet tale :)

Great story :)

(eyebrow raise) Interestingly twisted. I loved it. Anywho, good luck with future works.

Hi hun!
Sorry I have to post like this, for some reason I am having problems posting reviews :(
But on a lighter note, you blew my mind with this story! How you managed to write this incredible story in such short time is beyond me!
This is definitely one of my favorite fics of yours.
I loved the Snow White theme and Merlin looks to me like a boy version of Snow White with his pale skin and dark hair, he's so cute :)
I loved how Gwen and Morgana are "partners in crime" and that Gwen isn't a saint like in the show.
I felt that even though she made a short appearance here you still managed to give her a lot of depth which I really liked.
I gotta say that I loved how badass Freya was! She had this whole avenger thing going on and I liked how she cares deeply for Merlin and how she isn't the scared girl that we know her as.
"Your worst nightmare" now that's badass!
And come on, we had some Dragoon the Great action! I love him, I think he is everyone's favorite old man. He's hilarious and I love the faces he makes.
But as much as I loved every single one of these words my favorite part is the first kiss scene.
It's a very iconic scene that everyone knows since children and I love how you translated it onto Merlin.
And that sex scene was hot and steamy as usual, you always feed your readers very sexy Merthur moments that I personally need to survive :D
I was so happy when they got married and Merlin was pregnant.
Although the bit where Merlin tells Arthur he's pregnant was awkward and we all know now that Arthur has no tact whatsoever!
I loved the ending as well, how they had more children and were happy and then were buried in the cave, I thought it had a nice symmetry since that's where they met.
Brilliant story!
Hope you haven't fallen asleep reading this! lol

You'll most likely hear from Forever Cullens soon but I wanted you to know you both did a mind blowing job in my challenge, and with hours to spare. It was so cool I had actully been hopeing to stump you. Oh well...maybe next time.

Love it :)

Wow, I still can't believe we finished before the dead line lol
I enjoyed writing with you and look forward to seeing what else we come up with ;)