perfect. well executed, well worded, just perfect. and you managed to do use a very little touched upon relationship movie wise, and turn it into a believible yet touching story. great job

Write more about Will Scarlett!

Please oh please right more!

I love it! Just great! And something Will might really do... Just to save his skin but still nobody but him could think about it... In this particular situation...

Great to see a story for this fandom again, really loved it. The sarcastic banter between Will and Robin, and how Robin slowly got to realise what it meant to see Will becoming sick because of the potion.
Really hope you'll write more in this fandom soon :D

Never never never never stop writing for this. NEVER. You are amazing! It's not just that not a lot of people write for this fandom, although that's true, but you do it AND you're a fantastic writer with wonderful characterization. I will never get tired of your take on these characters and honestly when I saw you had written a new one I freaked out a little. This was so awesome. The witch is such a useful character that not enough people take advantage of, and you did a great job of it. Please write more soon!

This was so beautiful, and clever! I should have seen it coming, but I didn't! I was reading, wondering what the heck was wrong with Will, and realized it about the same time Robin did... It was brilliant! as always, this was well written, and since I've read you other stuff too, I kind of knew that you knew Will and Robin, but it was really great to read something this good, and true to the characters. Hope you pose more :))

Love McIzz

I love how you write Robin and Will so much! And I love the ending, it makes so much more sense for them to gradually realize and accept their relationship as opposed to the movie, where they are bros pretty much immediately. Great job on the story!

I really loved this. It was clever, and it was well done. Robin's reaction when he realized what must be the cause of Will's illness was perfect. Will giving in and asking what Robin wished for was perfect, too. Touching ending. Please write more!