So good, so well-written that I can picture everything about this chapter unfolding before my very eyes. I truly love how Josie rides out on Katy, and ends up talking to Lou - yes, this was exactly how this particular story should wind down...and I know the saga is not done! I now feel a deep sense of contentment that I hadn't felt before. Lovely, and touching. ML

This was...in some moments...a hard story to read...and in others, it was wonderful to read. I know all too well how a story can take a toll on you...on how it can take on a mind of its own and make you write and do things you didn't think or even wanted to contemplate...that's what it means to be a writer...to being vulnerable and letting things pan out the way they are meant to...even if it goes against everything you want them to. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

The wedding was sweet and I'm glad that Kid and Josie are together. It was such a wonderful thing for Josie to want to name her son after him..even though they aren't together anymore. Maybe some happiness can be born out of all the hurt that has happened.

I hate seeing any of the characters hurt...and Lou's death in this story is a hard pill to swallow...its just because I love the TYR characters so much...this has been an amazing angst ridden story...

Such a sad, sad chapter. So terribly, horribly sad...I don't know if I'm going to recover from reading this.

OMG! You've got me in tears here! What a devastating blow to the PX family to lose Lou...I'm not a happy camper...no way no how...this just is so wrong...

OMG! You can't leave it there! I can't understand why Jimmy is asking for his guns! Off to read more!

Definitely an angst ridden story. A new development in the friendship of Jimmy and Lou. Lou's still feeling so out of sorts..trying to figure out what he place is in the family. Kid and Josie didn't end up in the barn together to hurt her...just were in need of each other's company...now it looks like Lou has taken off...

I'm glad that Rachel had her talk with Lou...tried to make Lou see that she is just as important to the family as she ever was...just that how she fits in with Kid is different now...and I'm glad Lou is taking what Rachel said to heart.

Well I'm glad that Kid found Josie and has convinced her to come back to the station. Lou really needs to get over herself...she and Kid are both at fault for them breaking up the way they did and once she gets honest with herself she will realize that them breaking up was a good thing.

Lou certainly did not handle meeting Josie well...how Kid feels about her or Josie or the fact that Josie is married to Cody. She feels threatened on different levels and totally treated Josie wrong without even knowing the whole story...and considering what has happened to Lou and the things that she has experienced I would have thought she would have acted better...

Everyone is in a muddle right now...Kid, Josie, and Cody trying to deal with her feelings and the others trying to help, but stay out of it a the same time...

Everything and everyone is in chaos right now...Wow, Cody came real close to being the type of man that he never wanted to be...I'm glad he got some sense in him...Kid and Josie are feeling awful about hurting Cody...but seem relieved that the 'cat is out of the bag'. Teaspoon gave them all a good talking to.

I can understand Cody's hurt...especially over Kid's betrayal...but I think deep down he will realize that he doesn't love Josie either...not in the way she deserves.

Oh boy...here comes the world of hurt...especially for Cody...Kid and Josie have declared their feelings for one another...Jimmy has caught on to how Kid feels about Josie...and things are never going to be the same again