 shy girl 2004-04-11 . chapter 1 even though u might not have spent a lot of time on this (i dont know if u did or not) its really good. nver thought id read somthing like this about a comic book or a movie. keep on writing! |
 Ormspryde 2003-04-10 . chapter 1Such a wonderful poem, my dear. |
 Tam Breo 2002-11-02 . chapter 1that was really good! I've seen poems 10 times longer and a quarter of the meaning. |
 DominoDS 2002-07-17 . chapter 1sometimes with great pieces the length might not even matter. Your poem is very good and is original no one hasn't analyzed a hero in poetry before that i've seen and you did it very well.magnafique |
 Emily M. Hanson 2002-07-16 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 247Lyricism 2002-07-14 . chapter 1This is beautiful, and I absolutely love your concepts on what builds a hero. I think the idea that a hero can be simply someone with a pure heart is so true. Keep it up! You have exceptional talent. |