| Reviews for Between Brothers (Pure Redemption: Book One) |
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Avery 6/16/13 . chapter 20 The Guardians of Ga'Hoole wilie says Nix is a Masked Owl and his real name is Vaygar from the Books. |
Avery 6/16/13 . chapter 20 The Guardians of Ga'Hoole wilie says Nix is a Masked Owl and his real name is Haggard from the Books. |
DarthAstzelur 6/2/13 . chapter 1Very interesting story, but one question: What does Nix mean by saying "One day, Kludd, it will be you begging for mercy" any hints or something? |
revenage 5/23/13 . chapter 1 kludd saw nix and flew to him and destroyed him and kludd did not have to worry about that grass owl any more he then flew to Nyra they fought the guardians, and won, kludd's son became a pure one and a soldier they all live purely. |
kludd lyrics 5/19/13 . chapter 1 i have a little lyrics enjoy. it is about kludd to soren. Please, please forgive kludd But he won't be home again. Maybe someday you'll look up, And, barely conscious, you'll say to no one: "Isn't something missing?" You won't cry for kludd absence, kludd knows - You forgot kludd long ago. is kludd that unimportant...? is kludd so insignificant...? Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing kludd ? [Chorus:] Even though kludd will not the sacrifice, You won't try for kludd , not now. Though kludd will not die to know you love him, kludd's all alone. Soren Isn't someone missing kludd ? Please, please forgive kludd, But kludd won't be home again. "Isn't something missing? Isn't someone missing kludd?" [Chorus] And if kludd bleed, he'll bleed, Knowing you soren don't care. And if kludd sleep just not to dream of you soren kludd will wake without you there, Isn't something missing? Isn't something... [Chorus] |
Lady Typewriter 5/12/13 . chapter 25This was an awesome story, I'm glad I read it through to the end! It was great watching your writing improve. I wish I could have read it real time instead of all at once. The dialog in this story was fun to read and they characters were fun to read about. I loved how it ended, I can't wait to read the next part! Good job, this is an excellent story. I can't wait to read more of your work. |
bluecatcinema 3/20/13 . chapter 25A spectacular ending, my friend. And I see you're already laying the groundwork for a sequel. I look forward to reading more from you. |
Synchronized Harmony 3/20/13 . chapter 25The ending was well worth the wait! Excellent job! As for the sequel... Well, I look forward to it, but the warning sounds ominous. And the quotes were the final touch! Good job. |
X1Mobius 3/19/13 . chapter 25Unbelievable. Quite simply: Unbelievable. This story...the finesse, the detail, the care and passion so evident in every chapter; all conspire to make this (yes, i'll say it) the single best FanFic I have ever read. General, thank you for continuing and completing this story, and thank you for maintaining your enthusiasm throughout and not simply trailing off halfway through. It was, in fact, this story that inspired me to begin writing my own FanFic (not about LoTG; but rather about Minecraft), so thank you. I quite simply can not wait for the sequel and i'll find it difficult to read many FanFics between now and then; they will all pale in light of this masterpiece. Once more, thank you, Shen's General. You are an inspiration, mi amigo. Your loyal reader, -Mobius |
sonicfighter21354 3/19/13 . chapter 25Nicely done my friend. This is the greatest story I've ever read. I'm look forward to read the sequel. Again, excellent work. |
Elete12 3/19/13 . chapter 25 Yeah check out my page:P Lo anyways... HORAAAAAAAAYYYYYYT! YOU FONISHED. LOL I KNEW THERE WOULD BE A SEQUAL. Oops... Caps still on Okay my favorite part... The mention I got in the ending:P Lol actually though you really did confuse me for a moment... I don't like being confused. Not to mention samuel I suspected he was important in some way but not that important. Well anyways thanks for the read I will be back when your next LotG is out bye! |
Aniu16 3/19/13 . chapter 25 Dear Shen's General, Please not any swearing or such horrible scenes next time,THANK YOU! |
Crazybird101 3/19/13 . chapter 25Yaaaaaaaaaay! A good ending to a great fic!:D I loved it how you used the ending from the first film, where Soren is telling the owlets his story, great idea! Uh oh. Looks like Nix is hellbent on REVENGE. *Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuun* I'm in the credits? Yay me! You mentioned my story? Yay me again! But on a serious note: Awesome story. Good characters. Good cast. Good music choice. Great plot. This would have been a great sequel to the first film. Can't wait for the sequel! Everyone: Peace! - |
Godzilla Fan 2012 3/19/13 . chapter 25Well done for finishing your story, mate! A brilliant story & i cannot wait for the sequel, keep up the good work! |
ashthetyto 3/19/13 . chapter 25;) |