Cool. :)

Sorry I'm late just got back. Epic read. :)

Review over all 3 chapters:
Well, you have some amazing ideas here. The story is captivating enough for me to have bookmarked your work (:P), and your writing is clear and easy to read, in terms of structure. You don't have any pure grammatical errors, minimal spelling errors, but(!) your syntax errors can get pretty tiring... You might need someone to be the cleaner of the text. Whatever, you have a really good fan-fic coming out of your brain there, so I applaud you and encourage you to go on with it! Good Job, and thank you

Continue I like to see what this giggling girl wants with Shu...

Needs moar Diamond Priestess x Platinum Knight Romance.

Keep this good story

wow awesome fanfic
I hope you continue it and goodluck 3