Great hurry an update!

Hi I totally LOVE your story (i meen it is well writen) but may-be you should up the rating alittle bit abuse is not something I would want my little brother reading.

Next chapter! this story kicks ass! you are so going on my favorites list! well check out my fics to exspically Metting your match ccs!

lemme know when you update, please! i liked it, and i wanna know what happens next!

Uhm, I think this story has potential, you know? But I have to agree with Ria that it is almost impossible to read stories when they have virtually no paragraphing. I highly reccomend you take her up on her offer to edit it, and if she can't I will, 'cause I want people to be able to enjoy this more! :)

PLEASE FINISH!

Is Gordo alright?

this is a really good idea, but i'm sorry that i can't come to read the rest of it. i just really don't like the formatting. if you'd like me to proofread it for you and change the format i'll gladly do that. just email me anytime. maybe i'm being a little harsh, but little things annoy me, such as "My parents don't care about they don't probably know that I exist!" and how you used "said" (past tense) yet used "gets" and "passes" (present tense). i'm sorry, i really don't want to sound mean or arrogant. please email me if you want me to make suggestions. i will gladly do that (and kindly, mind you!) ) peace out.

lots a' luv,

RIA