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CherryBlossom006
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
hehehe i love it, except the fact he ruined the moment by throwing her to the wall...but its the jocekr, XD what can i ask for..
i liked the fact she sees in him some kind of inocense nobody else can see! :)
Persian Rose
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
That's totally the Joker's m.o. - to a T! Seduce Harley and then knock her out once her purpose had been served. I was totally falling for the act too; I can't blame her for not noticing. Then not caring when she DID realize what happened. Haha.

Nice touch with the cartoons and mac and cheese. That's so sweet, and it reflects the two of them very well.

I liked this one - well done!
Mabyelledeadtree
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Hey guys anyone see the dance routine from so you think you can dance Australia? You know the joker dance. Anyway i thought it would be cool to make a story on that dance. So the plot is an OC (who is a girl) is running in the park and somehow the Joker gets her she must be a hip hop dancer (in some form but not a famous one )anyway she fights back in his lair knocks him unconcsious but can't escape he wakes up but doesn't hurt her so anyway whatever you wan't happens and they fall in love after a while also NO harleyquin in the story can someone please write this for me? I would but i would have no one to share it with coz im not a member of anything. Thank you! Also wonderful might want to work on setting the mood better in stories.
Person
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed it :)
The only complaint I have is sometimes your for you're.
Nothing major just be sure you watch out for it in the future :)
Sera dy Relandrant
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Psychotic doctor, psychotic patient. But damn brilliant.
gunmetal grey
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
this was really good! loved it!
princessebee
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
Ah so much that was good about this fic. I love how you made Joker the playful, harmless prankster with Harley, tickling her and being so boyish, yet still seductive and dangerous. Very much as I can see Joker being.
Virginia Riddle-Malfoy
2008-01-23 . chapter 1
I like how you changed Harleen to Harley after her interview with Pam. Very clever, I didn't notice it until the end and then I had to go back and look to see when it changed. Great job!
GuesssWho
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
I think she's a masochist, don't you?
All Apologies
2006-10-23 . chapter 1
Teehee. I loved it. Thanks for sharing!
Somebody...
2006-08-13 . chapter 1
Nice story.
Jacqueline
2006-05-23 . chapter 1
Wow! Another winner. You really captured "Mr. J" perfectly in this piece. Knocking her out at the end was a trip, but oh-so deliciously wicked.

Love it!
bongo queen
2005-12-03 . chapter 1
superb! i love the psycotic way joker smashes harley into the wall...pure genious.
Wrongful Vanity
2005-10-16 . chapter 1
you rock. another beautifully written story about everyone's favorite psychopaths
Lady Mokodane
2005-07-11 . chapter 1
You know the dynamic between the two lovers here is depressing. Its like DC could have had the opportunity to rescue her in their stories... but knows that the tragedy in the relationship is important to readers... very nice story.
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