You should do a chapter on Cinderella! Like, trying to adapt to the new town she's in!

Great chapter :D And I don't think the end is too clichéd. It seems just the right spot to finish it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is quite an adaptation. I really am enjoying it, especially the fleshing out of Anastasia's character. I will be very interested to see where your story ends up. Fantastic so far!

Wow, the storyline is way more better than the actual movie, you've given Charles more into his character also Anastasia also added your own characters.

Cute chapter. I liked it. This is just a curious question but are you rewriting Up From the Ashes?

awesome sweet i like this Anastasia i can't for the BIG showdown between the Lady Tremaine and the royals

Sorry if this is late but I loved this chapter. It was well written with the emotions that everyone was feeling.

pretty good chapter

This is getting better by the chapter. Keep up the good work. I hope that Cinderella makes an appearance soon.

wonderful sweet

this is so cool please update

this was well written

Really good, I look forward to reading the continued story! Will written and interesting point of view, I've always thought it was to suger and spice how the prince just barely made it. Can't wait!

write more please its good i loved cinderella

I like this so far. I can't wait to see how this turns out.