It's a promising start for a Story.
I like the way you wirte

So far I really like your story- also, that was one of the nicest requests for reviews that I've ever seen on this site, so kudos for that.

It seems fine, so far. It just needs some more proofreading to get the orthography better, and maybe polish Tom's dialogue a bit more? I think he would sound a little bit more eloquent than that (and on the flip side, how old is Harry? Some of the words he said, and some of his thoughts seemed like they belonged to someone older.)

Interesting take on an old premise. (:

3 I love this, you know that right?

When I saw the house elf Twixy, I immediatly thought, whoa, why is a MLP ship involved in this. Then I remembered that Twixy is not affiliated with Twixie.

great chapter update soon

I love the interaction between Harry and Tom. This story is really interesting! I can't wait to find out what will happen at Hogwarts!

Write more! I love this story! Are you going to make Harry dark though or just totally loyal to Tom? I think the later is better really, but what ever floats your boat. It is after all your story. Update soon please. Good luck friend, FIGHTING!

The reflection was an interesting idea :)

its not bad, but it definitely needs a beta to be better comprehended.

i simply adore fics involving harry and an IC tom/voldemort! finding one that's really well written is a pleasant surprise, especially with a cute draco as a side dish! mmm... thank you for your wonderful story, I LOVED IT.

I think that the mirror image is a little bit more sentient than they first thought... anyway this chapter was amazing and I only just got what Harry meant at the end in the snippet from when he was younger, LOL. This story is the greatest, I love the twists and turns that you've put in it and I can't wait to see this Harry take Hogwarts by storm.

I'll miss little Harry as well. He was so cute! Hopefully is ability to annoy Draco will not disappear too!

Well that explains the lack of a reflection. Interesting. Really like it.

As for Albus...I do not like him. Canon!Albus is not evil but he is a manipulative bastard who thinks the sun shines out his own ass. If he were to apply for the US military, he would fail the psychological exam. His "For the Greater Good" crap is nothing more than an excuse to get others to do what he says without him having to much of anything.