This was magnificent. It's so difficult to find dark Pikmin stories. I absolutely love the voice in this. It made me feel weak in the knees. Srsly, your awesome.
K I'm done bye lol

Great story *nods* dark stories entertain me, not for their death related themes, but the mystery, complexity (difficult to explain), and sometimes- deeper thinking thoughts? Idk how to explain the last one, but your story contains all of them. I thoughly enjoyed reading this story, *smiles*

That was dark. Great writing but very very dark. It was good though.

A LITTLE DARK?! THIS IS DOWNRIGHT DEMENTED! Yet, I like it. I am a very strange person.

i like it a bit dark but you say that and how dose not like a bit of dark from time to time.

... Whoa, Olimar's crazy. I liked it, I guess.