I felt inordinately disappointed that Lara didn't apologize to the Eater of Heads after shooting him so many times. Bad manners and all after he helped them out.

Great story as per usual, though Lara seemed a bit off to me at some parts in her reactions to certain events. Eh, probably just me.

:D

Thanks for sharing and having the absolute amazingness to finish your stories.

Kat

I absolutely love your writing, and this piece did no less to impress.

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Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing!

Best regards,

Kat

I really like your writing style and the written point of veiw of the characters thoughts. (I hope that makes sense.)

It was rather hard to understand the first 'sequence' without the rest of the stuff.

Sometimes I got confused but found my footing again fairly quickly.

Its a scary enough story to make me regret reading it in the middle of the night ;)

I like it and will read your other stories about Lara ...soon ..ish.

Some people define a masterpiece as something 'they liked'. Pfft! I say a masterpiece is something that is in it's entirety made up of excellence.

This is deffinately one of the most interesting, captivating works of art I have ever read. It kept you on the edge of your seat, made you feel like you were there, and I have to say thank you. Thank you for writing this.

On a less formal note:I really enjoyed the character Emil. I didn't even mind that he and Lara obviously had some 'history'. And when I read some reviews for your other novels (I haven't read them all yet, I'm currently on infestation) I was overjoyed to find out you had brought him back.

Well done, Tim, well done.

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Wow... I really liked the way that you described everything in such detail, it really makes the story feel real. Nice work!

Wow! This was really, really good! You got me hooked and I *had* to read the whole thing to know what happened. It was a great idea, and well executed. Good job!

dude

Eater of heads? *lol* Oh well, that it was so what the heck... I like ur stories!

you must give me some pointers. this was cool, it should be part of the game! Even if I am too freaked out to play it. why? because after watching my mom battle a t-rex, that's it for me. I'd prefer the safe movie

Wonderful! I *really* enjoyed this tale, it was well paced and the imagry was fantastic.

Just can say that I really really enjoyed the story a lot, it is one of my favotites, you tim made a womderful job and I like very much how you make Lara act, I enjoyed this a lot, congratulation!

Hey,I've seen alot of your work on the Tomb Raider Archive At !I've already read it when I visited The croft Times, so I'm not reading it was awesome,but some parts were confusing.

jeez you write a lot

Wow, that kicked ass.

hi! :) I knew I'd seen your name and this story before somewhere...on .

I like your stuff a lot...it's well-paced and thoughtful and has inspired me to write some TR fanfic of my own. keep up the good work!