I just started reading this fanfict. It's very good. Keep going!

You are rushing the story too much, specially this last chapter (12). Take your time.

I'll give you a couple of quickly ideas to work for the crystal skull storyline:
1. Make Amelia effectively find John, then kill her. She needs to die to give Cassie another push in her live.
2. If you decide to kill her, make John the number one suspect but keep Charles as the murderer. Diana and Cassie already have some friction, this will make things worse specially if Diana has to keep Charles secret.
3. You have the opportunity to make Adam ruthless, manipulative and overconfident under the influnce of the skull.
4. Make Diana and Cassie half-sisters.

I liked. It was good.

This is really interesting and good great job I love the secret circle and this book is just the icing on the cake

Awesome. :)

Great job on this! It is wonderful to have new Secret Circles fics even though the show has been cancelled! Looking forward to more!

All I Can Say Is ... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWEEEE -3 Love Is In This Chapter

nice. :) update when u can.

So Emotional, Well Done.

Nice. :)

chapitre 9 a 12

Nice chp.

Nice. :).

Nice chp.

Good, Bad .. Nah. AMAZING! Omg Can Cake Be More Perfect? This Was A Sweet Chapter, Full Of Jealousy Too, Me Likey. This Was Sweet But Can't Wait For The Sexy To Come ;) So Faye Still Loves Jake, Wanna See Her Jealous So Bad ;D . Jake, Oh My Sweet Jake How I Love U. More. Continue

Update Soon! Fantastico

I love this story! It makes me feel better about TSC getting canceled.