Are you still taking votes for an epilogue? I would love to see one. Very enjoyable story.

First off, this quote was so perfect. The metaphor of the locusts for the birds is brilliant.
I love how you dragged out the reveal here, and then Lady Cemil's description of Oreius. I also like how she just knows that if Oreius says no, the kings won't be back to visit, even if they're above him in rank. It's cute :)
I'm glad the Lady met Aslan and was forgiven. I'm sure she'll do interesting things with this new understanding she holds. I like the happy ending for her son, too.
Absolutely wonderful story. You always have them so well planned, and the boys are just wonder in their bond to each other. Whatever crap they go through, you make it work it in the end.
And, of course, your ties to the Bible continue to amaze me.
Thank you for writing such a fantastic work! I look forward to reading whatever else you write in the future.
Yours,
Rayven

What a wonderful ending. I knew you couldn't kill Peter completely, but I wasn't sure how you would bring him back. I like this though, Peter learning to accept death and then finding he doesn't have to go, but still he's now ready when the time actually comes.
My favorite part was Edmund chasing Aslan through the trees and the Lion finally allowing him to catch up, Edmund having nothing to ask for, only to give thanks. It seems so selfless, and I bet Aslan found it quite refreshing not be be besieged with requests simply because he had the power to grant them. Wonderful.
Nice job!
Yours,
Rayven

I dedicated my afternoon to reading this fanfic and it is honestly one of the best I've read. The way you showed Peter and Edmunds personalities were perfect! As someone whose best friend roleplays Peter and his Peter is quite popular, I LOVED their personalities! Aaaahhddjdjjd I CRIED LIKE A "BIG, OVER-EMOTIONAL BABY" TOWARDS THE END NO JOKE I WAS SOBBING

This is getting really amazingly good! Hope the rest is the same:)

I LOVE this! Great job!

Such a perfect ending to this great and sprawling tale.
I haven't been reviewing much this semester as I've taken to reading mainly on my phone(which I find great for reading fanfiction chapters but terrible for actually reviewing), but I have read and enjoyed every single chapter of this story. You've been working on it so ceaselessly for so long and it's been something I've looked forward to almost every week. Aslan's appearances over the past few chapters have been absolutely lovely, as always. You do such a magnificent job of writing Peter, Edmund, and Aslan all separately, and even better when they're all together! I'm so glad Peter and Edmund returned to the Lady and she got a fitting ending for all her kindness. Great story-I'm so glad I've been reading it!

Wow! I loved this! You've done a marvelous job with this story! Thanks so much for sharing!
And best wishes on future endeavors! :-)
In Him,
Aeralinde

I'm saying this for the whole story and I have got to admit I cried with both joy and sadness as the story progressed! It was truly a beautiful and adventurous story that I'm glad I read!

Narnias no1fan :)

Fantastic story! I love how you took the story of Joseph and re-worked it into a Narnian tale. Very, very well written. Thanks so much for all the hard work and effort you put into this!

Wow. Lady Cemil must be SO surprised. I mean, slaves rising to be kings! But that's what Joseph did too...except that he's the second in command.

Perfect ending! Can't wait to see what else you've got coming down the pipeline...

Lovely story. I'm glad you ended with the lady. It was nice to have that closure.

Absolutely one of the best stories I've ever read. I was always happy to see a new chapter and am also sad about it being over, but proud that I was apart of it while it was still in the making. :)

Well, twas a grand ride. You have more than fulfilled your promise to your readers. If there truly was justice in this world, we would find a way for you to just sit and beguile us with wonderful tales the day thru. As it is, don't forget Once a Writer of Narnia, Always a Writer of Narnia! God bless!