O_O Wow, you actually make me feel bad for Bakura. Very nicely done.

Do you think you could write a story where Yami remembers being Yamasis and being friends with Bakhu. And he can find some way to save Yami Bakura. Also Have Yugi and Ryou discover their Yami's pasts. This story was great. Thank you.

lol, I love the way you captured everything in this story...everything was so well written and thought out. ^_^ (Or at least, that's what it appeared to be lol)
I realize this was mainly a "Bakura" story, but I wish there was some more Ryou involvement. T.T
Well, since the story is clearly done, I cant beg you to update soon or anything like that. :] But I saw on your profile that you were planning on working on more Ryou and Bakura stories! So please, write those soon!! XD I love your writing.

Aww..that's beyond horrible! :O
is this the actual story of what happened in the anime/manga to Bakura?? I always wondered...but I always missed that episode...lol. :P

Goodness...I just love your stories! They're just so well written and have so much emotion! I.LOVE.U. Poor Bakura...get away, his mine! AND RYOU TOO! -_-

Wow...reading THIS after watching the AE Arc is...scary. 'Cos you got lots right.o_o;;
So, I want to clear some stuff up, mmkay? About Egypt.XD

-It's 30 years ago. FOR SURE. The Valley of the Kings wasn't used for burials until about 10-ish BC. Or 1200 BC.xD WHATEVER lol.
-The slaves DID NOT build the pyramids OR the tombs! It was a national event for the Egyptian people, and they were honored to build the tomb. If they weren't, we don't know about it 'cos they were killed, or never told anyone.XD As for the whole 'hebrew slaves' thing...I don't doubt it, but I'm not quite sure...*disagrees with almost all of the Old Testament*XD

So, anyways, this is a WONDERFUL ficcie! I love the way you portrayed 'Bakhu'. And Yamasis is a VERY cool name.=D
I am thoroughly satisfied with staying up 'til 2am reading this!;P

Sincere thoughts and regards,

~Angel of Re

Yey! another great fic by White Angel Chan!!

Wonderful job! I love this story so far, and I've only read one chapter! Keep up the great work!

You said you didn't know Yami's and Yami Bakura's real names. Well, I do. Yami is [Pharaoh] Atemu, and Yami Bakura is Akefia [King of Thieves]. Hope I didn't spoil anything for you. Sorry if I did.

You should write Yu-Gi-Oh and Juliet. I just LOOVE humor!

MUHAHAHA MUHHAHA!1 EVIL PURE EVIL!
MUHMUHAHAHAH (DIE) lOVE THE FIC! EVIL!!

Im GOING TO BE REIVEWER NUMBER 150 HA HA MUHAHAHAHA

Keep with the story

sarah- O_O omg... *sniffle* wah! so *sniffle* sad... *crys*
sara- hey, psst! could yah send some facts? or where yah found em? please *poke* we trying yami bakura childhood too *poke*
sarah- STOP IT! *hits sara over head* sorry -_- oh yeah... *sniffle* WAH!

Hm... very well written, but your right, it doesn't go with the actual manga/anime...but its fanfic, right? Anyway PLLEASE make update the New Students (the Mill. Library has expired, right? -,_-) and make more stories with Y. Bakura acting like you had him in that story (fun but cruel so hes worth it *heart*)