Great writing! I throughly enjoyed it! They did really explain too much of Mark's early life in the series and I always got the feeling that besides his father leaving it wasn't all roses.

You did well with the emotions and how the characters would react with each other.

This was a good story which touches on McCormick's early life. I really liked hte imagery of comparing his face to an eclipse. It is always interesting when stories look byond McCormick's happy-go-lucky exterior and focus on soe of the resentment he has to be repressing for the events in his life.

I really enjoyed this...could feel Mark's emotion! Well done! :)

Nice story - thanks for not making Mac cry! He was angry as he should be and I enjoyed reading how that scene played out.