|Reviews for An Unwritten Future|
| Have a snickers 5/17/13 . chapter 1
I've got to say I read all of this story yesterday, and it kept me up until 3 AM because it was so awesome. Now you've probably heard this about a million times by now, or to be exact, 2637 times, but you know, I thought it'd be fair to add a review as I've enjoyed and read the story. So thank you very much for putting it up in the first place!
Yes. I might come back to this later, when I have more time!
| Guest 5/6/13 . chapter 1
Love it. You are a brilliant writer. I laughed out loud, sighed and cried. My fav story so far.
| Resa Aureus 5/5/13 . chapter 20
And Hermione sold her stocks and they were filthy rich and had tons of babies, the end!
GREAT STORY. No lie, this is top notch. Of course, you know that already. Loved EVERY minute of it! You're a truly talented writer!
| Resa Aureus 5/5/13 . chapter 7
Your portrayal of Lily in this is perfect. I know you must have gotten interesting responses about her since shes always portrayed as a saint. Trust me, I know. In my own story I made her more human, maybe a little dislikable, and I got the most remarkable feedback (not in a good way) but I truly approve. Thumbs up for you!
| Resa Aureus 5/5/13 . chapter 4
LOVE THE ROOM OF REQUIREMENT. Best part so far, the reveal of it saving her life. So adorable for a room.
This is probably way far off as far as time is concerned, but I hope your friend did well in New Jersey. I was born there, and you're right. It is extraordinarily weird.
| Resa Aureus 5/5/13 . chapter 2
Enter: The Marauders. Oh I can tell this is going to be good. Nothing I like more than a well written time travel story about snape and hermione
| mousemt 4/28/13 . chapter 20
| AnElegantCatastrophe 4/27/13 . chapter 20
Awwwe! This story was so cute! :) I really liked how you pulled the ending! Awkward Sev is the best, hahaha :D Thanks for writing that gem!
| JadedPureblood 4/25/13 . chapter 20
This was amazing... I can't even say anything other than that. Thank you for posting.
| LazyNezumi 4/23/13 . chapter 20
Well. Woah. This was amazing story... I'm just completely overwhelmed by it.
Thanks so much for writing it!
| RussianDestruction 4/20/13 . chapter 1
Aw, it was sad when Aurora was ruminating on how she had conspired with the staff to make Sev's year as Headmaster a nightmare, when all along he had been on their side. :(
"It's hard to keep lying to yourself when you catch your paragon of virtue with her heels in the air." I don't think I've ever disliked Lilly more than when I read this sentence. :( :( :( "Evans strung him along terribly. She liked being worshipped." That's how I always think of her, too. As having strung him on, but then he never got over it, and it ruined his life. Although, of course, had it never happened, Voldie might well have won the 2nd war, since the Order wouldn't have had Sev as a spy! :o Aw, Snape as a happy drunk. I think I AW'd out loud. But then this immediately made me tear up: "It occurred to me after he'd died that I hadn't seen him smile in years." :(
I love how abrupt her shift to another time was. Yay, Snape makes his first appearance! I'm so glad this isn't one of those fics where we have to wait chapters and chapters for him to arrive. :D
| Unnamed Wanderer 4/17/13 . chapter 2
He is soooo cute!
I loved the line: "Are those knickers or some kind of sling shot?" That seriously cracked me up XD
| dyeyell 4/16/13 . chapter 20
I really liked this time travel story. I know it can be daunting to write one and deal with the whole paradox thing, but I think you did well with the story of multiple futures and whatnot (very scientific, I know). Not to mention, she hashed it all out at the Ministry off screen, so to speak, so I'm sure it was all explained ;)
I wold totally enjoy a sequel, so feel free to write one up. Especially since this is the first time I've seen Snape travel to the future (or past).
| wingsrookie 4/16/13 . chapter 20
That may be the best ending line I've ever read!
| Purpletounge 4/14/13 . chapter 20
Very very nice. I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for all the effort.