So why was there horror on bella and Rachel's faces with Picard? Is it a trap? Thanks for writing and sharing, can't wait for more.

You are a terrific writer. Loving this story.

Thanks for another great update.

Loved it. Beautifully written. More please and have them get together soon. And then have beverly's legendary temper come out when she finds out about the threat, thank you

Ah god damn romantics the pair of them. Love them. When are they going to be lovers. They are so close. When is jean luc going to tell Beverly and the intelligence about his life being at risk? Is that what she needs for them to take their relationship to the next level? Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update more soon.

Loved the end to this chapter. They only have eyes for each other. Prusher. Wonder when they are going to show Rachel how to conduct a sexual relationship. When are Picard and crusher going to take their relationship further. Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update soon

So glad to see a new part and showing P/C as a family with the Lts.

Looking forward to more

Yes a very good update. Will be awaiting your next chapters. Loved all the disloyal and the teasing was perfect, as was the last line. Thank you. :))

I hope you havent had a total writers block. This was a very interesting story and I loved the darkness of it with the love story.

Please post soon

I'm really enjoying your story! I like the combination of action and romance, I like to see the characters at their work/duty, because it's so much a part of who they are. Chaps. 5 & 6 especially affected me. Chap. 6's telling of part of Rachel's story is nice. When can we expect more? Thanks for writing.

Wow. Just found this story. Thanks for writing abd sharing please update soon.

Another excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.

I love it! Keep it up. I think the change of style for the war scene was perfect. It remindes me of picard touring the Enterprise before the fight with Shinzon and the Scimitar. The slight reference to Lord of the Rings after the battle of Helms Deep was also very nice (not sure if you meant it).

Another great chapter. Can't wait to see how it all pans out in the end.

This is a great story - very compelling, and well written. It's nice to see the progression of their relationship.

I agree that some sort of scene break would be nice - it can be hard to follow when the scene suddenly shifts.