Reviews for Dragonborn
Morpheus Davol 11/25/12 . chapter 1
Vrust Rehelast -Name

Frost Breath (Lets be original here) Due to his over use of the shout he has built up a major immuinty to cold and his shout holds such force behind it that can freeze targes in it's place Median level enemies though.-Favorite Shout

A personally forged Sword from a mixture of Metals and Ores The major ones being Steel, Moonstone,and Silver That was melted in the Plains of Oblivion. The blade was forged at the Sky-forge (Was trained by Eorlund Graymane.) The Sword Name was Dubbed "Grohiik-Fo" (Meaning Wolf Frost.) -Weapons of choice

I count BEAST FORM as one, And let the other be Healing.-Spells(two)

Again Personally forged Same Materials, Has a striking resemblance to the Nightinggale armor or Dark brotherhood but is made out of light weight Metals like Moonstone and Malachite. But has been fused with Leather and Dragon scales to make a light weight flexible armor that Has high endurance also giving it a lively but shockingly Dark look to it. (Magic and black smithing.)-Armor

Idk Talk with me about it later Bro.-Death
Samm The Writer 10/10/12 . chapter 1
-Name: Lokkaal (Dragon for Sky-Champion)

-Favorite Shout: Firebreath

-Weapons of choice: Glass Sword and Glass Shield

-Spells(two): Lightning Storm and Fire Storm

-Armor: All Glass Armor

-Death: Killed by Alduin in some way.
Rosiegirl52 9/6/12 . chapter 1
I hope you are still taking in characters! I'll submit mine through pm
Tylersenden 8/23/12 . chapter 1
great story my character would be if he is selected

- Tyrone FlameBlade, Nord ,BLonde Hair ,Blue eyes that when described are blazing blue as lightning almost, mom got hit by a shock spell when she was pregnant
- Favorite shout FUS-RO-DAH/Unrelenting force or YOOL-TOOR-SHOOL/fire shout
- Weapon of choice would be a Dwarven Great-sword which my character found in a blackreach (not really good story) Its named the "Saber of Fallen hero's" it is solid white ivry colour until you shout "For Fallen One's" burst's into blue flames down the sword and also absorbs magika
-Spells Fireball spell with argumented fire comes out Blue and Shock cloak arguented shock
- My armour is Steel-Plate it it Gold and black with redtrim around the black no helmet amage cowl or tiara armour was an old family relic from the oblivion crisis given to my family for there service in the battle for the imperial city.
-Death Final Battle does a suicide spell to save everyone or in the ruin of scaldaphin when we are surrounded by hordes of deathlord by the portal and dragons
dillon 8/23/12 . chapter 1
shoutice form
weaponwuuthrad
spellsdead thrall and storm thrall
armorblades armor,volsung,dadric gloves,enchated rig, steel
deathsaving a important person
THYRONE FLAMEBLADE69 8/24/12 . chapter 1
Amazing story so far

-Tyler Flameblade
-Nord
-unrelenting force or firebreath
-Weapon of choice enchanted dwarven great sword enchanted known as "Saber of fallen heroes" when the words "for the fallen ones" are spoken the sword bursts into a white flame,(its enchantment is Fire and absorb magicka) the sword itself will have been found by me in blackreach it was enchanted by the last living dwemmer who asked for death by me.
-secondary weapon an ancient nord hero Sword with Frost Damage and soul trap the i called "Frozen hell"
-For spell i would like a Shockcloak full powered argumented shock and Fireball
-for Armour i would like a Set of Skyforged Steelplate armour that i had made myself it glows black and gold (when i found the last dwemmer he used what was left of his races power to enchant my Armour with the souls of the dwemmer he never told me the enchantments only that in time of great need could i use its full potential)
- death for my character would be using All of my armors power that has been stored by the dwemmer ,to stop a giant dragon army from stopping us from entering skuldaphin. i give my sword to you and say take it and kill alduin with it
i transfer as much of my soul and its power into it and go and make you jump in the portal.
i use my Armour to destroy all the dragon with a giant explosion of fire frost shock with all of my stored dovah souls fueling the power
SpartanC156 8/23/12 . chapter 1
Ocelot kajit
Wulthrad (Lightning enchantment)
Fire breath
sun fire and mend
Full enchanted steel plate

Those bastard twin dragons in the new dlc... Dragged under water and drowned
Raex 8/23/12 . chapter 1
This seems like the beginning of a good story, i will eagerly await the following chapters. As for my dragonborn:

Name: Xathryx

Race: Breton

Class: Assassin/Battlemage

Favorite shout: Marked for Death and Slow time in equal measure (Marked for Death if only 1 can be chosen)

Weapons of choice: Mehrunes' Razor & Ebony dagger (no dual wielder)

Spells: Invisibility & Conjure Frost Atronach

Armor: Ebony Boots & Gauntlets, The ebony mail & Otar mask

Death: Burned alive and thrown down a cliff by multiple dragons.
Navare 8/23/12 . chapter 1
Name: Marc
Race: Breton
Favourite Shout: Frost Breath
Weapons of choice: Two ebony swords
Spells: Firebolt and ice spike
Armour: Dark robes and a hood
Death: Sacrifices himself to protect the fellow dragonborns
Other: Reserved, though chatty with those he knows well. Sarcastic to those he dislikes. Never knew his second name
EddyPM 8/23/12 . chapter 1
Name: Remi White-Wolf

Race: Breton

Weapon: Twin Blades Swords

Armor: Dawnguard light armor

Spells:Paralyze, Detect Life

Favorite Shout: Ice Form

Death: Dragon grabbing him in his mouth, flying away. He manages to stab the Dragon's eye, killing it, but the fall leaves him very injured and he cannot heal in time to survive
HaruNights 8/23/12 . chapter 1
Submit by review? Oh well here goes nothing. Warning farfetched character(will never happen)
Name : Rai, half khajit (has ears and tails but no fur/claws,posesses night vision.)

Shout : Krii Lun Aus ( marked for death)

Weapon : Nightingale bow (frost enchanment)

Spells : Invisiblity and Mayhem

Armour : nintingale boots and gloves, thieves guild armour and dark brother hood assasin hat.

Death : Alduin tries to bite another dragon born but Rai rushes in and sacrifaces himself to save his comrades. As he is thrown into a nearby object his last words are "everyone win."
Review: good job i liked how well you described the battles even throwing in a twist or two. Whoever makes it in i will always be there to read your newest chapters! - Haru
NamikazeMinato Kiiroi Senko 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Name: Ryu Stormblade (Redgarud)

-Favorite Shout: Yol Vah Shool

-Weapons of choice: Enchanted blades sword (parlizise & Drain health) Muramasa
enchanted dragon bone bow fire & soultrap
enchanted dragon bone sword Ice & Shock
Blades for close range
Ebony Arrows

-Spells(two): Thunderbolt and Lightning storm

-Armor: Nightengale Armor maxed out smithing so
chest: 130
gloves: 41
hoods: 59
boots: 39

-Death: fightning to the death to slow down alduin in the fog so the others can get to the hall in sovengarde and whispers I wished I could see this to the end so its up to you guys I'm sorry (Dragonborns) Ulfric, and most of all Serana I'm sorry I couldn't keep my promise to come back (pulls down cowl and face mask and coughs bloods which dribbles down on both sides of his lips and looks at the sky and dies looking at sovengaruds sky as he hears the crys of clear skys and draws his last breath to see alduin engage the remaining dragonborn and shouts one more time Yol Vah Shool at the back of alduin's head and wings and dies with his eyes open.
Rolf 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Martin Septim

Weapons Skyforge Steel Battleaxe

Armor Skyrforge Steelplate Armor

Favorite Shout Unrelenting Force Fus Ro Duh!

Male

Death Dies battling several Legendary and revered Dragons

Background the Great great great great grandson of the last Septim Emperor. So he has the Dragonblood in him.
Martin Deptim 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Anon

Favorite shout is fire breath
Armor is armor of the old gods
Weapon is orchish sword of flames
Spell Fireball and Lighting Bolt
Death is killed by a legendary dragon defending the main Dragonborn
idrawedyouaduck 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Great story and interesting premise. I like where this is going.

Kita, Woodelf
Aura Whisper
Ebony Bow, Mehrunes Razor
Invisibility, Close Wounds
Ebony Mail (the daedric artifact) and nightingale boots, gloves, and cowl
What does death mean? How my character dies?
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