Still reading, and still enjoying!

I really like this so far!

Nice way to start creating tension. I think its going really well and I'd love it if you'd update a little more often but I understand if your busy but all in all I love the story so far and can't wait to see what you think of next.

Oh! It's nice to see those three again! I had no idea they were going to show up so it was a nice surprise :D

I really like where this is going, everything is so exciting now and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really looking forward to see how all this will be handled, like how, when, where and who will save the world from darkness once more?

I'd like to say its a great story so far and there seems to be a nice build up. I think that you've made luneth a little to childish in my opinion but at the same time it's still funny. The final fantasy franchise as always been one of my favourites and I think you've done a great job of it so far in keeping in with the feel of it so well done.

Great job so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

You are still amazing! Great job at this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hahaha I just love it how you can put humor in such serious/dangerous situations xD And Refia is showing her motherly strength! Hitting people with house objects xD I think this was my favorite chapter so far, the others has been good to of course but this one had it all: Action, excitement, humor, love and friendship plus some more! It was awesome to read! ;D

Hehe ! That's great, like always ! At the begin, I thought you abandon that... But not ! So thank you ! I love FFIII (remake DS) and the FF3 are rare ! Thhaaannnkkk yyouuuu... )
O_o Refia is crazy... "Just to be sure!" XD You're a psychopath, Refi... But me too ! D

I know you hates the bad grammare, but I'm French (and an idiot... TT-TT) so forgive me please... *puppy eyes*

Goodbye ! Baka27

And how am I supposed to be able to concentrate on studying in the library with an ending like that?! AAAH WHERE'S INGUS!? Please say that he is safe with Sara! Or no, don't tell me, I'll wait for the update :D Wish I could write a longer review but I have to get off the bus and head for that xtupid library Dx And why do people bring a bag of chips as their study snack to the library? Don't they know it makes too much noise? But most of all, it makes me want some too xD Is 'chips' the correct english word? xD Anyway, awesome and exciting chapter as always! Who's that mysterious girl!? o.o

Good job; keep it going.

Argh! How come I don't remember what happened to the Enterprise?! Dx Although I can only assume it broke somewhere during their wild adventure xD See, I really need your novelization of the game to remember all the events xD

I think my absolute fave part was when Luneth imitated Salina and not only because that was a beautiful Luneth/Ingus moment but also because it was ridiculously fun xD I can't understand how you can come up with the best jokes, or whatever I should call it xD I rarely read one of your chapters without laughing loud to myself!

I also enjoyed that cute moogle who appeared pretty much out of nowhere xD He seemed kind but maybe a little moody.

Anyway, I really thought this was a good beginning! If a sequel was made to the game I can really imagining it starting something like this. I mean, you get to see how things worked out after the Darkness but also glimpses of another danger approaching.

Really good work! And I'm looking forward to more! ;D

This is BRILLIANT! i like the mix of humor with seriousness. Although I don't know the characters I like the way you have potrayed them. Well done!