You always stop your stories for o reason

Math in this chapter! (It's SO hard! My brain can't handle it!) *Sarcastically*

i like the BAD EXAPLES OF WAYS TO USE ETC.
here is mine;
and the murderer was you. i can tell you why too... first he tied a rope to the door etc.
how was that?

I...I'm not sure what to say. It was less a cross over and more...two short fan fictions on one page...

Not to mention simple words like "bowl" were misspelled, but words like "uneasiness" and "lingered" are no problem?

i read a oline summery of ranma, and i thnk this story hits the dot!

seems interesting ne

All the BOLD text in this chapter made me cringe. I skimmed through the rest of the text, but came away uninterested. :(

-chronodekar