That was so cute!

It's really cute And pretty good for your first one-shot :D

However, I'd like to correct a part of the Japanese you used. 'Ai' is the feeling 'love'. When referring to a person you call 'love', you say/call them 'koi' which is really just the short version of 'koibito' which means 'loved person'.

Vivid x Dreams

Aww I love Nalu stories like this :)
Great job! Can't wait for more!

kawaii! luv this pair n its cute, made sense and wasnt 2 mushy! luv it!
btw natsu learnt japanese the same way i did (_)
faved!

ja ne
Nya

awwwwwwwww

aww sweet.