It is nice to be back and to see a update! :D Man your story is so good that it feels like the chapters is to short but i now it is me that gets so in to the story that time just fly bye! XD I hope it goes good in school for you and i am looking forward to the next update! :D

Whoa, so sorry about the late review I hadn't realized that the story had been updated, I need to start checking my email more often. Anyways this was definitely a very interesting chapter and I gotta say it's probably one of my favorites. I really liked Dayren character development in this chapter. I mean what kind of key did Patty find, what does it do or open, and why the heck does Dayren want it so bad? I mean why did he start acting that way I could definitely tell that what ever it is it's affecting Dayren in a bad a way based on his reaction and treatment towards Rita and him not even wanting to talk about it to Raven 0_0.I mean what the heck happened to him did he become possessed or something and how is this going to affect the group as a whole, I mean I know they consider him a friend and trust him just like he considers them friends and trusts them based on the ending of the chapter but it seems as if Yuri and Flynn might not totally and completely trust him since they want to keep an eye on him.I guess they have a good reason to, I mean what's he hiding. Why did the voice inside his head call him a murder and say that the story he told everyone about him failing to save the dying Duke be a lie. It make me question what actually happened between him and the young is this going to affect him and Patty's relationship at all I mean if I were her I probably keep my guard up around him to make sure he didn't steal my treasure. I was also worried about Dayren and Rita's relationship. After all, out of all the members in Brave Vesperia Rita seems to be the closest to Dayren after Dayren's sudden personality change Rita seemed really hurt. I was afraid that she was really going to start to mistrust and dislike Dayren and start to keep her distance from him. But based on what happened between them in the cabin it seem it's only brought them closer together. By the way I thought that their little moment was pretty dang cute, I was totally not expecting that from Rita, honestly I was expecting for her to throw a couple fireballs at him so for him to give him a kiss on the cheek was a pleasant surprise :) Oh I also liked Karol and Nan's interaction towards the end I thought it was good character development for Nan :). I also liked Raven, Tillya and Kara's interaction during the middle of the chapter i thought it was a great way to lift the tension in the group at the expense of Raven's ego XD. It looks like they finally landed in Desier I wonder how Dayren is gong to handle the desert climate, is he going to like it like Raven or is he going to totally hate it like Rita. I also can't wait to see his reaction when he first meets Judith and Ba'ul. i can't wait for the next update you certainly gave us a very interesting chapter with many new questions that I really want the answers too. You said that you're out of practice but it doesn't seem like you are. You gave us a very interesting chapter and I honestly can't wait for more. Can't wait for your next update oh and good luck on your exams.

Okay, let me just say that you can't hope to understand how sad I was when I realised that there were no more chapters to read until you next update.
I love this story, your OCs, the way that you've written it, the way that you've included skits, titles and boss battles- everything.
Another thing that I like is the Dayren/Rita pairing! It's adorable and they go well together Dayren is an awesome OC, by the way. I have an OC who uses a similar fighting style, in the sense of dual-weilding and casting. In her case, though, Dayren's kicking would be a spear. She's quite quiet and it's difficult to earn her trust, but she opens up after a while.
I'm thinging of making a story similar to this one, with the aforementioned OC in it. Her name is Kasai.
I really wanted to contribute to the story so, if you want to, you can include Kasai.
Thank you so much for writing this, I think it's a great addition to the collection of Vesperia fanfics. I'm waiting eagerly for the next update

Aw, Karol is so sweet to say that.

This is a great story so far, every single chapter. I look forward to another.

Thanks for the update and I can give you tips about how Rita will realize she's in love. Rita with her attitude she's obviously a tsundere meaning she will act mean to the boy she likes at the beginning and slowly she will soften up to him before she starts denying likes him and further ahead she will realize she likes him acting more nice to him. Eventually she will show anger to hide her concern and it will cause her to hit the boy. Hope that helps.

Hey! Really love you fic! It kept me reading all the time and i don't get bored for even a second! I hope you will continue this amazing fic!
Btw,i was insipired to make my own story,thanks to you.
Don't worry i won;t steal your ideas,and i welcome if you want to gave constructive ideas,no flames please! .

Oh! No more chapters! :O I am really tired for not havet seen that! XD

Great work and i dont now much about Patty since i cant Japanese and only have the xbox version so i cant say anything about her. I hope you and your friend are heaving fun playing Vesperia! :D Well since it is late i got to go to bed but i will read more tomorrow! :)

Sorry for not reading your story in some time now. It is not your fault it is my computers fault since i had to reinstall everything on it. So i had to find were i was and get some stuff back and i got distracted by other stuff that have to do whit real life. Well it is good to be reading this again! I see i have some reading to chats up on! :D

So sorry about the late review but I was super busy all week, I was so happy when I saw the chapter update especially since I was actually getting kinda worried since you usually update faster I'm glad to hear you're feeling better :D. I gotta say I loved this chapter. We finally found out why Patty was chasing Dayren around, talk about a big misunderstanding XD. But I think it's exactly what would happen if Patty thought someone was trying to steal her treasure. I also really liked how you portrayed Patty and Dayren interactions I think you really portrayed Patty's character really well based on how I've seen her act in videos. We also find out what Patty was actually doing on the ghost ship. You ended the chapter on such a cliff hanger. Which I think is a good thing cause it keeps readers interested and excited for the next chapter. :D I gotta say I wasn't expecting a boss battle in this chapter so that was a really pleasant surprise X3 I really enjoyed reading the boss battle you did a great job describing everyone's fighting styles in this battle. I especially liked seeing how you described Patty and the junior members in this battle. I thought having the junior members and Tillya join the fight instead of just standing by was great. I also thought it was great that you described all of the junior members' individual fighting styles instead of just saying they joined the battle. - I also thought that the boss monster was really clever. It just emphasized the fact that this chapter had a pirate based theme at least that's what I think. I thought that the name, its fighting style and overall character design were all really clever too :) I really liked how you put in that secret mission in there too it made it look like we're playing a sequel to the game. Like I've said before if they ever make a sequel to the game I really hope they base it off your story since I think it's the perfect sequel to the original game. Oh and I also really enjoyed the "Patty and Kara" skit since those two characters are pretty different so it was interesting to see how they interact with each other. Oh and I'm super happy to hear that you uploaded the first episode of your live play series X3 I'll definitely check it out :D. I can't wait for the next chapter I'm super excited to see what Patty's treasure is and why Dayren is so shocked to see that she has it.

Yay! Another enjoyable chapter, and thanks for answering my question from before! Good humor and action are always welcome, especially when integrated well. You do, however, come across as playing it a little too safe with Patty at times. I admit, since the LP I using as reference for her character is far from complete (the last thing I recall seeing in this particular LP is the group wandering the desert after agreeing to help look for the parents of some children in Mantaic), I have no idea how her character changes by the end of the game, but I have a feeling her eccentricities aren't as toned down as they are her. You still have her as social and cheerful, but I think you should throw in some sea metaphors and have her be more energetic. But hey, that's just my take on it. And you have do the basis of the character right. If Patty were written here as being something along the lines of silent, serious, and regularly brooding, I would be both terrified and furious...Why do I have this feeling somebody has written a Tales of Vesperia fic with her portrayed almost EXACTLY like how I described? *shivers* Please let me be wrong, please let me be wrong...

Let's Play is up. Yay.

whooo a chapter! I've been waiting!

Another Boss Battle hahah I love it!

well there's another thing...but eh forget it...

anyway good luck on the LP...I'll be watching (if i have time) and don't worry about your accents...I love English aAccent...

Ze Mist

Don't worry I'll stick around for now ;)
Rita's taken a slight liking to Dayren I think huhu...but now I really do wonder what Patty has hidden in her treasure chest o.o
Can't wait for both the next chapter and the LP!

Hey, Presume people other than D read the reveiws, so I am just going to say this here;
The filming of ToV (Xbox) will commence soon, as in this week. If my equipment still likes me by the time we film it then the first episode shall be up hopefully in a week or so, as it shall become my priority. -P