I'm not sure how much weight this review will have since it's been such a long time since you've written this, but this is one of the best Tokyo Babylon lemons that I've had the pleasure of reading thus far. I love how you manage to show both Subaru's desire without completely disregarding his innocence. Truthfully, I've entertained similar ideas around this scene (because I'm just disgusting and perverted like that), but I was very surprised to actually find a fic about it. Anyway, great job!

Aww...poor Su-chan. Love your story! *huggles*

This was perfect. That's the only word I can think of to describe it. The emotion, the mood, perfect. Wonderful job. It broke a little piece of my heart.

o_o

*claps* Yay for lemons!

Okay, now that that's out of my system, really good story! One of the better TB lemons I've seen. Very believable. I'd almost think it might have happened :)

...then what could make his tears go away?

THere's no hope...

it's all about instant pleasure and desillusions...

-thank you for 'confirming' my beliefs in human nature.

I love the story. It portrays the two characters so well.

It is probably as close as the two can get in the TB world.

A wonderful story. It's hot, it's dark and in character, and that juxtaposition of the sex with their first meeting...wow! I love that mix of sex and violence. Thank you for writing this.

OOh, I love it. Probably the only plausible way for SxS to happen within the TB universe, and you've done a wonderful job of writing it and staying within character at the same time. ^_^ I don't think I'd mind reading more stories by you at all, lol. (Take that as a suggestion/hint, perhaps? ^_^;)

Ah, a true TB/X fic.
Screw all that fluff/sap SeixSu, that's never going to be true. But this...ah, this was really well done.
X-era Subaru is always so conflicted about Seishirou...almost a madman, if you'll pardon me. This shows a very, very good interpretation of how that may have come to be. Seishirou can never be a "good" guy. Subaru can never be a "bad" guy.
That's why they can't sperate themselves from each other, in truth or lie.

...Wow. Just....wow. I am so freaking disturbed and yet... ::pauses to think:: I suppose a bit overwhelmed. That was quite powerful and moving. ::grins:: Ah... and just when I thought SxS fics were beginning to get boring. (Sh! I never said that! XD) Keep on writing, ne?

Wow! I love this story. Very beautiful. ^_^

i loved this so much! one of my fave x couples too... it was so good.

I like it. I found it to be a beautiful piece.