i love this story
first, i love it because you really make this fic like the real film
second, i love the way you describe his personality, imagination, and the case
i feel like i'm watching the real show!
i really hope you make more stories

I promised that I would finally get here to read your perception stories. I decided to come and read because I know how brilliant you are. I really enjoyed this and you've captured Daniel and Kate's relationship so well. You're the one who got me watching and you'll be the one who get's me reading fanfiction too! I'll work my way down the story list. Wonderful work my friend!

this story is like a well-constructed, lovely episode. i love it, case, romance, dialogues, all of it. and the end of the story is awww 3 *saving*

"I hope this is okay," " he said, referring to the flowers, " I'm not good at this romance thing." - your doing just fine Daniel

This time when Daniel fitted his lips over hers, the kiss was soft, slow and effective. Sensations raced through Kate's body and pooled low in her stomach making her knees weak. For a breathless moment her heart beat fast beneath the pressure of his exploring mouth. :) :) :) :) :)

THIS WAS COMPLETELY WONDERFULLY TOTALLY AWESOME!

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

**getting anxious**
you deserve a huge helping of kudos for this fic my friend, this is GREAT!

Daniel had meant to be gentle but at first contact, their kiss was blazing and insistent. It seemed as if all their pent up feelings came rushing forward as they enjoyed the pleasure that flared inside one another at this new discovery. **fainted**

i did finish reading but i can't stop thinking about the kiss

can't wait to read chapter 13

"Do you know your eyes sparkle whenever you mention Daniel's name?" Michael observed. - :) :) :)

He met her gaze. Though Kate didn't say it, Daniel knew this discussion would not be about the case, and he was more than ready for that. **squee**

Studying Kate intently, he realized that the more cases he worked with her, the more attached he was becoming to her. - excuse me while i attempt to pick myself up from the floor, i just melted and slid off my chair

The ends of Daniel's mouth curved into a smile, "You do realize that desserts is stressed spelled backwards, don't you?" - he's soo adorable

"Yes," Daniel and Kate said in unison as they quickly looked at each other in surprise.-ahhh awesome line

another great chapter

"Are you asking her for a date?" Daniel defended her, "because she'll turn you down immediately." - LOL

Right now, all he wanted to do to was grab Kate by the waist and pull her towards him, letting the momentum bring her full against his body until she was nothing but a tumble of leather and stiff limbs in his arms.- i don't know if i can go on, all these nuggets

But, Kate deserved better than that, he surmised, she deserved better than what he could offer her. :( oh Daniel you don't give yourself enough credit

(Wow, thanks for reading/reviews! I'd love to make every chapter about yearnings and loving gazes, but we do have a mystery to clear up with three poker buddies being the likely suspects! But don't worry, more D/K private ments later!) i suppose your right lol

that awesome depiction of Daniel teaching, i felt like i was watching the show

onto chap 9...this is a great fic

"You're not ready, Daniel," she remarked quietly. - awww :(

There was a realization that they were once again in close vicinity of one another. Kate tried to concentrate on the letter, but she was distracted by his nearness. - i'm getting goosebumps

She touched the back of her palm at the place where Daniel had placed his hand and she could feel tingles. A sigh escaped her as a wave of pleasure caught her at the way he had been looking at her. She had not imagined it. There was something there.- i'm in daniel/kate heaven - gotta come up with a cute them for them lol

I HAVE TO WATCH the last two episodes of the season now

"Sorry," Daniel apologizing, casually putting his elbow on the desk and resting his head on his hand, "I just had an urge to speak out of turn. That urge has now passed...as you were saying?" - LOL i can't picture this

he could never figure out why he had that affect on her, why he seemed so appealing.- lol you and me both

Swallowing hard, he now placed one of his hands in the center of her back to comfort her. His body was filled with a sweet warm ache as his breathing became shallow.- just them hugging turns my insides into mush

wonderful chapter.

Daniel was determined not to let Kate's presence affect him, although he could already feel his heart beating faster. - awwww warm fuzzies

but as he watched Kate, he noted a stray strand of hair had fallen over her face. He longed to touch the silken strand, my heart is just melting at these nuggets

this was a totally awesome chapter... onto chap 6

awwww poor Daniel hearing, he thinks it's not over between Kate and Michael :(