This is one of the best Final Fantasy XIII-2 fan-fics I've. read. I love the way the NoelxYeul is advancing and the back story you've created for Noel. All the other parts are still good though.

Aww... Noel's mom died, but yay! Yeul is here again! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

But I like it when you do flashbacks... I also don't care if there is already a book about Noel's past since I like yours better. I think that the person could be Yeul or Caius since they are probably the people who he has know for a while now.

Great job on this chapter! Hope you get the next one up soon!

Yeah! Bedroom Confinement for 2 seconds! That was kind of mean that Noel thought that Hope would actually fall for that. Is Vanille and Fang going to make an appearance/ mention in this fanfiction?

My first reaction to what Noel said about Yeul, wow... he's only 6 and he already has a crush, and second, yeah! Yeul is finally here!

Great flashback! I love it when people try to create Noel's past since it doesn't really tell us that much in the game.

This sounds really interesting! I like how you incorporated some of the aspects in the game with the fanfiction. I also have to say that I love the way the characters are portrayed because that is exactly like them! Especially the way Hope acts.