oh my god i love the mystery in this! Great job keep up the good work :D

That's ok, I know what you mean :)

ohhh, I feel a fight coming on. Really good update through you did have a few grammer errors; you put well when i think you meant we'll. You also put thinks instead of things, they're the only ones i can remeber from the top of my head, oh and yo put a c in please. but other then that it was very good. Quick question, is the Jane in this chapter Jane Foster or another Jane.

Well done, i cannot wit till the next. Though i would make the chapters little more lengthy.

OMG THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! Due you soo have to make an update