|Reviews for The True Champion|
| CracktheSkye 4/18/13 . chapter 9
Welcome back, Wolfy! What an appropriate chapter title! Things do indeed occur! Max and Grace get training from the semi-creepy psychic twins, Lance goes looking for answers, and finds only more questions...Ash doesn't seem to change much, though. Still wants to be dramatic with the reveal...and Misty and Ash's heavy hitters duke it out. Awesome. May and Dawn were hilariously in character, too. I would have sent a PM, but I figured I had no right to, considering that IS and MeE have both stalled out at about 2000 words each. Either way, great to have you back! See you next time!
With Highest Regards,
| CharlieBoneFan 4/18/13 . chapter 9
Now I'm curious to who Lance was going to see. I also can't wait for the top 32 and Red's interview.
| WhiteEagle1985 4/18/13 . chapter 9
An interesting chapter here. Not sure I like the new format.
| Lazerfish 4/18/13 . chapter 9
Glad to have you back. Really liking the new format and its good to see the plot back up again. keep up the good work
| Pokefan56 4/18/13 . chapter 9
The math was a draw.
| Mr.E 3/31/13 . chapter 8
im totally in luv with this story n i hope you update soon! P.S. im guessing that was Ash's squirtle that Misty was using.
| The Agent of Fire 3/25/13 . chapter 8
This story is absolutely amazing. I've seen lots of fanfics about Ash disappearing and then reappearing at a Championship (sometimes betrayed, sometimes not) but this is by far one of the best. It's very well written and everyone is pretty much in character.
I like the lineup of Ash's Pokémon (Though I have to admit, I would've expected him to have an Espeon instead of a Vaporeon. Not that I'm complaining; Vaporeon is one of my favorite Eeveelutions.) and I find it interesting that the group (or at least Misty) have taken in a few of Ash's old Pokémon. (I'm guessing from the sunglasses that Misty might have taken in Ash's Squirtle along with the aforementioned Lapras.)
Anyway, really great job so far. I'll totally be watching for the next update. Mostly to see if they figure out that Red is Ash yet. I find it amazing that they haven't guessed that yet. I mean, he's a mysterious Aura User (You know, that kind of makes him sound like a drug addict...) with a Pikachu that has a love of ketchup and rides around on his shoulder. How many of them can there be? Of course, the anime only touched on Ash's Aura ability a few times that I remember, so I guess they wouldn't know too much about that part. And I'm rambling now, so I guess I'll say, "Good job!" one more time and sign off. ;)
Here's hoping for a fast update.
| Pyrrhos Nightmare Dragon 3/4/13 . chapter 8
Really great story. And from me, thats saying something. Love your excellent grammar (it seems to be rather sparse around this place) and hope you update soon! BTW, have you ever heard about 'aura wings'? Check 'em out!
| CharlieBoneFan 2/12/13 . chapter 8
Go Ash! He is such a hero and I love the sttraction between Red and Misty.
| Flamingfoxviper 2/12/13 . chapter 8
awesome story so when misty gonna learn the truth
| njhnaruto 2/12/13 . chapter 8
reiewa are like sex for you authors arn't they
| Inflamora Notoris 2/12/13 . chapter 8
Rachael: Ok... I LOVE IT! A tasty flavour of adventure and romance with a delightful dash of suspense. An exquisite mix!
Jess: ... Oh dear, she's channeled her inner connoisseur again... I personally blame Cilan from the black/white episodes.
Rachael: Jess... I'm a Pokemon breeder not a Connoisseur.
| Guest 2/12/13 . chapter 8
When is next chapter want it this story is way cool
| mfmxxx 2/12/13 . chapter 8
Ash asking "if they found Ash?" always seems to be annoying, as he seems to be rubbing it in to them that they havent found him.
Curious if Misty will fall for Red before she finds out hes Ash..
| Princess Selina 2/12/13 . chapter 8
Oh poor Misty! Please update as soon as you can, I understand just as well as any writer the distractions of the universe, but please update soon!