|Reviews for The True Champion|
| WhiteEagle1985 2/11/13 . chapter 8
Another excellent chapter in this excellent story!
Idea: Sooner or later, someone needs to guess that Red is Ash and confront him about that. Maybe Gary?
| jshadowitz 2/11/13 . chapter 8
freaken beaut. I missed this. Nice comeback chapter. I look forward to seeing spectre in combat, and hope you put it in soon
| CracktheSkye 2/11/13 . chapter 8
...Awesommmmeeeee... Seriously. Max and Misty's battles were full of win. You definitely played Aquarius Stadium off better than I did. TREMBLE BEFORE THE WRATH OF GYARADOS! TREMBLE! And Simo- I mean Squrtle makes his appearance, with usual aplomb. Lance is seeing an old friend...hmmmmmmmmmmm... I sense plot development! Bravo, Wolfy.
With Highest Regards
| Chariform 2/7/13 . chapter 7
Love the story. Update soon.
| Marii Lupus 1/8/13 . chapter 3
Maxes roasting over and open fire...
Oh wait, I'm supposed to be reviewing. Right.
All right, fight fight fight. :3 I'm a really big fan of the way you write the battle scenes. Sometimes people struggle with action scenes like this, and I think it's really special if someone's actually able to pull it off. Nice job, and nice chapter.
| Marii Lupus 1/8/13 . chapter 2
Intriguing, yes, very, very, intriguing. You know, if I didn't know the ending, I would be oh noes over Giovanni. Very oh noes. And I'm still oh noes anyway.
Oh right. Compliments.
This was a good chapter. Your chapters aren't ridiculously long, but they don't really have to be because your writing style is really good. It doesn't leave someone feeling dissatisfied whenever they finish a chapter.
- Quippy Historian
| Amalgam 1/8/13 . chapter 7
| Marii Lupus 1/8/13 . chapter 1
Me gusta. Which is typically, coming from you, very much anticipated, since you know you're awesome. XD This starts off really well, leaving the reader open to wondering things like, "Oh, I wonder where this is actually going to turn". As you know, being unpredictable makes for a great plotline. Okay. I go review the first chapter now.
| Alex B 1/6/13 . chapter 7
This is awesome. keep up the good work. The small details that you add make a huge impact over all. Such as using the legendary pokemon as expressions. I feel really immersed in your world.
| Arkarian23 12/2/12 . chapter 7
Wow, really enjoying this story so far. Trainers becoming stained to their pokemon's type is pretty interesting and has some interesting potential for expansion. Ash simply choosing not to reveal himself like this is different from normal explanations as to why he hides from his friends, very pleasd with this story. I don't favourite unfinished stories on principle except for one exception, but if this is ever finished its going up there.
| sortofbored 12/1/12 . chapter 7
I really like it so far. What happened to Ash's old pokemon? Looking forward to more.
| Nianque 11/29/12 . chapter 6
So what happened to his old pokemon? Is that what his troubled past thing is all about?
| WildFaeryMagic 11/29/12 . chapter 7
This chapter was soo cool! It makes me wonder what type Ash/Red is…This story is very good please update soon!
| DarkPirateKing69 11/19/12 . chapter 7
as long as you don't go too far with the aura/Psychic powers and such.. so this doesn't go to the PowerShipping category or whatever it's called. that would kinda ruin this imo. as long as ash isn't battling legendaries on even ground, i'm fine with it. this is too good to stop reading at anything less than that. anxiously waiting for the next one XD
| DarkPirateKing69 11/19/12 . chapter 5
you sure made the meowth/persian pretty competent huh? that's awesome(my favorite word)! maybe the duo isn't totally helpless either. there are so few stories with decent and able jessie/james. just don't let them get captured! this story rocks, so i just put it into favorites now, instead of later.