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| Reviews for The True Champion |
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   DarkPirateKing69 11/19/12 . chapter 1'Alongside him trod a blue, jackal-like creature that perhaps stood up to the man's shoulder'. that's one big ass lucario.. official height is 3'11" (1,2m). and awesome job with the persian. this is first fic for me where TR meowth actually has evolved. this sounds interesting setup even if pretty standard. i read all the current chapters before deciding if i put this into favorites or not. |
| Dragonheart1234 11/15/12 . chapter 7 Great story, and from what I can tell this is going to be an Ash and Misty pairing. Dragonheart1234 |
| foggraven 11/15/12 . chapter 7 good chapter especially the latter half |
| WhiteEagle1985 11/14/12 . chapter 7 Interesting chapter! |
| Princess Selina 11/14/12 . chapter 7 This is brilliant, it gives a brilliant new perspective to Pokémon that I don't think anyone else has considered. It was a wonderful chapter, and I love seeing how you've focused on a particular group that wasn't shown as a set in the anime, the mix of Misty, Max and Ash as a group brings a new flavour to the story. It's a fanfiction that isn't like the others, and I love it, please keep writing. xxo Princess Selina |
| CracktheSkye 11/14/12 . chapter 7 Yay! New chapter! And don't worry, your chapters don't take nearly as long to come out as mine! By the way: this first part of the chapter: you sir, are Psychic. Ash's fifth pokemon is a Salamence, because awesome dragons are awesome, and the free-for-all was awesome. I wonder why Ash is so hesitant to reveal himself? It can't just be because of Team Rocket...Excellent job with the bond between trainer and pokemon, Misty can hold her breath for TWENTY MINUTES? DAMN! If life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then sit back and let the world wonder why you did it. What branch is your brother in? (And it's a Level in Badass, but Lesson works too, I guess, because Basic is Training from Hell) Don't stress too much over the chapter rate, just keep delivering great chapters and we won't lynch you through your computer screen... With Highest Regards, CracktheSkye |
| PhoenixLyric 11/14/12 . chapter 7 Hey, great chapter! Nothing to critique- I appreciate the fact that you went further in depth into the origins of aura- not many people do that. Not only did it read well, but it made sense. Congrats, that's a tough concept to grapple with. Now I want Athena's purple sword. Although, considering my clumsiness, that would be a really bad idea. Can't wait to read your next chapter! PL |
| Argorok 11/14/12 . chapter 7 Excellent job, please update again ASAP. |
| Silver Heart11DOOM 11/9/12 . chapter 6 not bad not bad at all |
| Guest 10/29/12 . chapter 5 Please keep it up. This is by far the best story i've read on here. |
| Guest 10/29/12 . chapter 2 KEEP. WRITING. This is such a great story. |
| up 10/4/12 . chapter 6 red should have meloetta and/or latias on his roster. they're legendary but not the super uber ones. |
| Guest 10/3/12 . chapter 6 This chapter was awesomeeee! Worth the wait! Long chapters work well. They help the story flow much better, as opposed to several, short, segmented short chapters. |
| CharlieBoneFan 10/4/12 . chapter 6 Me gusta. I'm in Spanish 2 and learned that about three days ago. |
| Flandre NightShade Scarlet 10/4/12 . chapter 4 So I assume the pairing will end up with ash and misty? A good story so far. |
