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| Reviews for The True Champion |
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  LittleKing9512 9/12/12 . chapter 2 Why does everyone go with Red or Satoshi!? It has gotten cliche now. :(-pouts I would have gone with something original like... (Gets cut off by one of my OCs.) Shinryu: Shinryu Shuzen? YEP! :)-idiot smile Shinryu: Idiot. |
 foggraven 9/11/12 . chapter 4great story looking forward to more |
| Kagehana.Tsukio 9/9/12 . chapter 4 great story so far |
| Mr.CornChips 9/9/12 . chapter 4 lol good story not cliched like most... also will therre be a pairing |
| Princess Selina 9/7/12 . chapter 4 Hey there, I'm loving this story of yours, Athena's story was so sad, I really hope that one day she'll be able to trust properly. Update soon. Selina |
| CracktheSkye 9/6/12 . chapter 4 I just love a good tragic backstory. So, Athena was the first to join the team...do the rest of Ash's team have backstories like this? Once again, I must commend your descriptive language. You really do have masterful control of the language, to the point where I can see every scene playing out, full color and motion. There's even background music! Seriously though, you're doing an excellent job. I await the next installment with bated breath! Best Regards, CracktheSkye |
| yiu 9/6/12 . chapter 4 love the additional background info of ash & athena :) great chapter btw. |
| iwish328 9/6/12 . chapter 3 "top percentage of Rattata joeys a boss |
| The elder troll 9/6/12 . chapter 4 Absolutely amazing chapter |
| Poketurn88 9/5/12 . chapter 4 Me and the review button is now friends and we agree that this story is coming along nicely. |
| CrimsonMercenary 9/5/12 . chapter 4 Another great chapter! I love how you give the pokemon such strong personalities...and I have always been a fan of Misty's Golduck, so it was good to see him so active in the chapter! The story is getting very interesting, can't wait to see where it goes! |
| Tha Golden Boy 9/5/12 . chapter 4 So we were introduced to one more of Ash's pokemon: Vaporeon. Not surprising he had an Eevee-evolution; most people tend to give him one. We also got to see some interaction between Misty and Ash, but I'm most looking forward to his first interaction with Brock since Brock knows him better than anyone, other than Pikachu. |
| Argorok 9/5/12 . chapter 4 Excellent job, please update again when you have the time. |
| Tha Golden Boy 9/2/12 . chapter 3 I love stories where Ash leaves for an extended amount of time; whether due to betrayal or by choice. These stories usually work out better since you can have the time he has been away from society to give him a much needed personality change. The way the story is going so far it seems there might be Pokeshipping, if you indeed are pairing Ash with anybody. I look forward to your next chapter and discovering what the rest of Ash's pokemon are. |
| Uranium235 8/28/12 . chapter 3 Nice chapter. I noticed that when you talked about what each of Reds Pokemon were doing in the forest you only talked about 5: Pikachu was on his shoulder, Athena was taking a walk, 2 were sparring, and 1 was watching the clouds. Did leave 1 out on purpose or did you miss it by accident? Also, do I see the makings of PearlShipping in the future? I hope so. Its my favorite. |
