Very, very nice, heartfelt story. Can't wait for more.

I hope you finish this...its great...write more

Another beautifully crafted chapter. Dani and Jesse make a lovely couple and this 'first date' was sweet and charming. Well done, I look forward to the next chapter.

My Jesse-Dani inner shipper applauds and thanks you! I loved it!

Awesome cant wait to see what happens. I hope that Fiona gets to meet Gabriel x

Very nicely done! I really liked how you wove the flashbacks into the story , the action was well paced and the relationships between the characters was spot on! I really liked Mike's phone home for help, especially with Fiona and especially liked Fiona giving Jesse romantic advise about Dani. My Pearce/Porter inner shipper was so pleased! Sorry I am so far behind on my reviewing! Can't wait to see where you take this next.

First of all I have to apologise for taking so long to get around to reading your beautiful story. When JediSkysinger mentioned reading it I made a point of trying to catch up and I'm so glad I did. Your story is so in character and beautifully written. I am very much looking forward to reading more, hopefully I can get here a little sooner next time! Well done

We want more chapters! :)

I LOVED chap 1 & you have really upped your game with chap 2! This is rich in detail & emotion. Very true to the characters & their voices come through clearly. I will really look forward to the rest of this work. Well done.

One note: As with any writer, you would benefit from a good proofreader.

I'm really enjoying this story, the scene with Michael calling Madeline for advice on child care was lovely and very in character. I look forward to more chapters.

I'm really really loving this story!:)

I am really liking this story, I hope you update soon.

Intriguing start. Very interested in where you take this.

I really got caught up in this story even though I did not expect to. It is nicely detailed & moves along well.

I think I see what's coming but am enjoying it & am happy to continue the ride.

Thanks

I can't wait to see where this goes! Well written and a good read...