This story is very nicely written, managed and divided. The reader can actually feel the pain in the ass... This is sad and yet creative.

Hmmm...Poor Blackwatch soldier, killing his family and himself with a bullet in the head is better than serving for the blackwatch.
Once again ; keep it up.

C.I.R.I.A

I like this chaper, this guys is likeable but not a paragon, but you it gives us a window to relate to.

Irrrrrronyyyyyy. XD I like this chapter, actually. Well, just as much as I liked the previous chapters, but still. I do oh so hope you update soon. With longer chapters, hopefully.

Update soon. I think this has plenty of potential. Keep up he goodwork.

Same as previous. I wish these were longer though.

I like this. This is actually pretty interesting. I want to know more about this guy.

now THIS, is interesting! I look forward to reading more!

Interesting, but will this be Prototype 1 or Prototype 2? I hope for the former, because the latter's plot is shit.