cute story. i like melanie and ginny as a couple they are so cute together. its cute seeing melanie so protective and jealous when she thinks ginny likes charlie.

aww, poor mel ;_; love me some minny, tho, no matter how veiled! it's like sasha said - i wish they were all lesbians.

Nice stuff! more please

Wow! This is really good! You hit all the characters straight on! And even though you did 'copy' the scenes, you put your own spin on it and added thoughts that fit perfectly. This is sooooooooo amazing! :)

I love this very much. The voice you give Melanie is so perfect! There really should be more Minny...

Haha funny story!